You're Caught

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Its the game we play. The rules undefined.

I do not have wings, a cloak or a pointy hat.

My broom unmagical, only sweeping the floors of my flat.

No crystal ball readings or brewed voodoo potions.

Dont believe in the use of abracadabra lotions.

My bewitchment my smile, casting a spell.

In my eyes the hocuspocus and that's how you fell.

You believed fate arranged for us to meet.

My  make-believe has me perfect from my head to my feet.

You feel powerful believing the illusion that Im your catch.

My enchantment of your mind to your sorcery, no match.

 


Submitted: April 21, 2012

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jmurch

...and you do not need enchantment! You are naturally sweet and this my booksie friend is enchanting in itself...Without any hocus pocus. This poem is proof positive of your above average talent. i am also forever grateful to your passionate critiques of my works. Thank you so much!

Mon, April 23rd, 2012 8:13pm

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wow Im so humbled if I look at your work I see so much depth and it inspires me to go look deeper. Thanx for the readx

Mon, April 23rd, 2012 1:58pm

Mike Stevens

Another winner!

Mon, April 30th, 2012 12:46am

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Glad you like it Mike, and thank you for the read and comment it is simply delicious. xx

Sun, April 29th, 2012 10:44pm

moonphish

oh the wiles of women....i gave up trying to figure it out long ago.....never question joy

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 5:15am

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lmao

Mon, May 21st, 2012 10:44pm

Ian Dawn

Oh so true little one, you have power that of a god when it comes to capturing and captivating. nice write about what makes us, well us.

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 11:02pm

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I can only say...I try ;) M x

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 9:47pm

Michael68

Not only is your beauty probably as bewitching as you say....but the words you write takes my breath away...very excellent write.

Tue, August 21st, 2012 1:25am

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Thanks This is one of my favourite poems
M x

Mon, August 20th, 2012 8:10pm

Insane Membrane

I recall the intensity of it all :-)

Wed, October 14th, 2015 4:19pm

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