Rain - The Cloud's Silver

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A description of being cozy inside during the rain.

Drops on the roof, pitter patter.
If you are inside, the rain doesn't matter.
The rain dances to the ground
A silent, sliding, slipping sound.

Running, rushing, rain
You are hit but feel no pain.
The silver of clouds show
As they release droplets on all below.

-J. Murphy


Submitted: June 10, 2011

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snowclift777

i liked it because you put a lot of thought into it..

Fri, June 10th, 2011 9:19pm

Kariss

Very nice. I will think of this next time it rains (which will hopefully not be on my softball game tonight!) Thanks for putting rain into perspective for me! ;-) Kariss

Fri, June 10th, 2011 10:32pm

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I'm glad you liked it. I hope the weather was good for your game!

Sat, June 11th, 2011 8:03am

Imagine Words

WOW I like the imagery this gives the reader great work :D

Mon, June 13th, 2011 1:01pm

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Thanks, I was hoping people would like the imagery.

Mon, June 13th, 2011 4:11pm

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