Get your control back

Reads: 393  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 9

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Status: Finished  |  Genre: Editorial and Opinion  |  House: Booksie Classic

Get back your control in life and make choices

In the midst of darkness,
hope is the only light.
Everytime you fall,
get up for one last fight.

People will hate you,
some may despise you.
But all you need to care about,
is you

They will beat you, they will hurt you
they will try to pull you down
Get up on your feet and laugh at them
as if they are all clown

Its true, life ain't easy
Its true, life ain't fair,
But that's what makes it interesting
where every success, is like fresh air

Don't let others control your choices,
Don't let them hack!
Its your turn today,
get your control back.


Submitted: February 28, 2012

© Copyright 2022 murtuza. All rights reserved.

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments:

Comments

glitter snow426

oh wow, so cleverly written, such a wise, precious message, very true, good and touching!! GREAT WORK, TRULY SPECIAL!

Tue, February 28th, 2012 2:48pm

Author
Reply

Thanks a lot :)

Tue, February 28th, 2012 7:37am

Gagan

True Words, nobody will believe in you till the time you believe in yourself!

Thu, March 1st, 2012 3:56pm

Author
Reply

Absolutely. At the end of the day, you are the one who will live with yourself. So why should any one else control your choice.

Thu, March 1st, 2012 9:49pm

Darklady

I love your poem it's a sad one yest with a message of hope, it's small but it says all! Well done xx

Thu, March 1st, 2012 4:31pm

Author
Reply

Thanks :)

Thu, March 1st, 2012 9:48pm

Liza Red

You know what? Whenever you're notifying me that you have a new poem up, I would always frantically search for it on your page because everytime you have a new masterpiece to share with us, that could only mean one word: INSPIRING.

Your poems are short yet very inspiring. It tells us that even when life isn't that easy, there's always a reason to be positive. Your poems give us hope when one is experiencing sorrow.

Thank you for such a very touching and inspiring poem. I like it.

XOXO,
Liza R.

Fri, March 2nd, 2012 12:40pm

Author
Reply

Thank you so much for your kind words :)

Fri, March 2nd, 2012 4:52am

ashi17

Very realistic, down to earth, inspiring......., but my complaint is same ........hope you will work on technique too, proper balancing of words and rhyming will enhance beauty in your poetry and it will be PERFECT, over all it is very good & I loved it. Keep inspiring your readers.

Fri, March 2nd, 2012 3:37pm

Author
Reply

Thanks :) appreciate your comments. If I am not asking much, it would be really helpful if you could reconstruct parts of my poem, to get a better understanding of what you mean. Anyways. Thanks again :)

Fri, March 2nd, 2012 10:03am

SGBanks

This was a good poem indeed. Inspiring none the less. It's time for us to get control again of our lives

Sat, March 3rd, 2012 4:51am

Author
Reply

:)

Fri, March 2nd, 2012 9:11pm

Insane Membrane

a reminder to us all to keep on trying and not let the knockers keep us down

Sun, March 4th, 2012 8:42am

Author
Reply

:)

Sun, March 4th, 2012 3:37am

GuiltyPleasure

Yeah! Life can be totally under one's control. Liked the message so wonderfully delivered. Thanks for the inspiration.

Sun, March 4th, 2012 4:18pm

Author
Reply

Appreciate it :)

Sun, March 4th, 2012 8:41am

Facebook Comments

More Editorial and Opinion Poems

Other Content by murtuza

Essay / Travel

Short Story / Romance

Poem / True Confessions