I miss those days

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Missing those childhood days..

I miss those days,
when the sun was not so hot.
When frozen water,
tasted like ice cream some-what.

Shouting with others,
with every run scored.
Jumping in joy,
with every marble sold.

I miss those days,
when car was less and people more.
We played football on streets,
with a team of four.

Racing in the rain,
with no finishing line.
Swimming in muddy water,
seemed perfectly fine.

I miss those days,
when, our body felt so light.
Ran barefoot on fields,
till the airplane was out of sight.

Life made more sense,
no matter how senseless others said.
When we would fall asleep,
as soon as we laid on bed.

I miss those days,
when the sun was not so hot.

Submitted: June 18, 2012

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SalemCorey

Perfectly said

Mon, June 18th, 2012 12:59pm

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Mon, June 18th, 2012 6:23am

M.Frost

im inlove with this poem ,those were my days when i was little... well writen :3

Mon, June 18th, 2012 2:38pm

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Thanks. We all miss those days :)

Tue, June 19th, 2012 12:33am

ashi17

Wow very cute poem, absorbing innocence, feeling connecting with it, good work Mr. Murtuza :) ! Keep your pen moving :)

Wed, June 20th, 2012 4:13am

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Thanks for the appreciation :)

Tue, June 19th, 2012 10:46pm

Gagan

An excellent mail, liked it a lot :)

Wed, June 20th, 2012 5:54am

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Thanks :)

Wed, June 20th, 2012 12:20am

Sezan Vahpieva

awesome poem. it flows so beautifully, i like it :) good job!

Wed, June 20th, 2012 4:27pm

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i am glad u likd it.thanks :)

Wed, June 20th, 2012 10:07am

glitter snow426

very good, surely felt the deep feelings, the way it used to be!! GREAT WORK, love it, WARM SPECIAL!

Thu, June 21st, 2012 2:52pm

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Fri, June 22nd, 2012 8:11am

SGBanks

I liked this... use to be the same when i was little

Sat, July 7th, 2012 2:11am

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Mon, July 9th, 2012 2:26am

shaleheen

i feel your emotion. How colorful is your early life!
The theme of poem is nice but try to develop more poetic approch.
over all good ....
thanks
-----------Shaleheen

Tue, September 25th, 2012 6:40pm

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Thanks for the advice. Will keep in mind :)

Wed, January 30th, 2013 9:35pm

Poetlife

I relate, I miss some of the days gone by too.

lLke jumping in the pond with the frogs & the dog, on moonsoon days of heavey rain, and running round the house, with squashing mud between ones toes, rain bath they used to call them.
Oh! I remember it well.Sadly now those days have gone, just a memory with me still remains.As I recall.

I like this poem best of all so far, I will come back & read more.
Blessings.Take care.

Sat, March 30th, 2013 2:34am

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