I miss those days,
when the sun was not so hot.
When frozen water,
tasted like ice cream some-what.
Shouting with others,
with every run scored.
Jumping in joy,
with every marble sold.
I miss those days,
when car was less and people more.
We played football on streets,
with a team of four.
Racing in the rain,
with no finishing line.
Swimming in muddy water,
seemed perfectly fine.
I miss those days,
when, our body felt so light.
Ran barefoot on fields,
till the airplane was out of sight.
Life made more sense,
no matter how senseless others said.
When we would fall asleep,
as soon as we laid on bed.
I miss those days,
when the sun was not so hot.
Submitted: June 18, 2012
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im inlove with this poem ,those were my days when i was little... well writen :3
Mon, June 18th, 2012 2:38pmWow very cute poem, absorbing innocence, feeling connecting with it, good work Mr. Murtuza :) ! Keep your pen moving :)
Wed, June 20th, 2012 4:13amAn excellent mail, liked it a lot :)
awesome poem. it flows so beautifully, i like it :) good job!
Wed, June 20th, 2012 4:27pmvery good, surely felt the deep feelings, the way it used to be!! GREAT WORK, love it, WARM SPECIAL!
Thu, June 21st, 2012 2:52pmI liked this... use to be the same when i was little
Sat, July 7th, 2012 2:11ami feel your emotion. How colorful is your early life!
The theme of poem is nice but try to develop more poetic approch.
over all good ....
thanks
-----------Shaleheen
I relate, I miss some of the days gone by too.
lLke jumping in the pond with the frogs & the dog, on moonsoon days of heavey rain, and running round the house, with squashing mud between ones toes, rain bath they used to call them.
Oh! I remember it well.Sadly now those days have gone, just a memory with me still remains.As I recall.
I like this poem best of all so far, I will come back & read more.
Blessings.Take care.
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Perfectly said
Mon, June 18th, 2012 12:59pmAuthor
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:)
Mon, June 18th, 2012 6:23am