I miss those days, poem by murtuza

I miss those days

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Missing those childhood days..

Submitted: June 18, 2012

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Submitted: June 18, 2012

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I miss those days,
when the sun was not so hot.
When frozen water,
tasted like ice cream some-what.

Shouting with others,
with every run scored.
Jumping in joy,
with every marble sold.

I miss those days,
when car was less and people more.
We played football on streets,
with a team of four.

Racing in the rain,
with no finishing line.
Swimming in muddy water,
seemed perfectly fine.

I miss those days,
when, our body felt so light.
Ran barefoot on fields,
till the airplane was out of sight.

Life made more sense,
no matter how senseless others said.
When we would fall asleep,
as soon as we laid on bed.

I miss those days,
when the sun was not so hot.

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SalemCorey

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Mon, June 18th, 2012 5:59am

Perfectly said

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Mon, June 18th, 2012 6:23am

M.Frost

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Mon, June 18th, 2012 7:38am

im inlove with this poem ,those were my days when i was little... well writen :3

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Tue, June 19th, 2012 12:33am

Thanks. We all miss those days :)

ashi17

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Tue, June 19th, 2012 9:13pm

Wow very cute poem, absorbing innocence, feeling connecting with it, good work Mr. Murtuza :) ! Keep your pen moving :)

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Tue, June 19th, 2012 10:46pm

Thanks for the appreciation :)

Gagan

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Tue, June 19th, 2012 10:54pm

An excellent mail, liked it a lot :)

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Wed, June 20th, 2012 12:20am

Thanks :)

Sezan Vahpieva

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Wed, June 20th, 2012 9:27am

awesome poem. it flows so beautifully, i like it :) good job!

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Wed, June 20th, 2012 10:07am

i am glad u likd it.thanks :)

glitter snow426

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Thu, June 21st, 2012 7:52am

very good, surely felt the deep feelings, the way it used to be!! GREAT WORK, love it, WARM SPECIAL!

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Fri, June 22nd, 2012 8:11am

SGBanks

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Fri, July 6th, 2012 7:11pm

I liked this... use to be the same when i was little

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Mon, July 9th, 2012 2:26am

shaleheen

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Tue, September 25th, 2012 11:40am

i feel your emotion. How colorful is your early life!
The theme of poem is nice but try to develop more poetic approch.
over all good ....
thanks
-----------Shaleheen

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Wed, January 30th, 2013 9:35pm

Thanks for the advice. Will keep in mind :)

Poetlife

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Fri, March 29th, 2013 7:34pm

I relate, I miss some of the days gone by too.

lLke jumping in the pond with the frogs & the dog, on moonsoon days of heavey rain, and running round the house, with squashing mud between ones toes, rain bath they used to call them.
Oh! I remember it well.Sadly now those days have gone, just a memory with me still remains.As I recall.

I like this poem best of all so far, I will come back & read more.
Blessings.Take care.

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Wed, May 1st, 2013 11:42pm