No looking back again

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Just move on, no matter what ever has happened

Why are you looking blue?
Why are you looking sad?
Is there something,
that has happened bad?

I see you crying.
I hear you moaning.
I guess you had wished,
for a different ending.

You can't undo your past,
I know you can't stop crying too.
So I won't ask you,
So just cry till you are through.

Cry and cry till you are tired.
Cry till the pain feels less.
Shout, shout your heart out,
Till the past is not a stress.

But when you are done moaning,
It will be a new start.
Life will become an empty canvas,
Just put in your own art.

Make your life big, then long,
Every day sing a brand new song.

You can't change your past,
So live everyday, from now,
as if it's the last.

Submitted: March 04, 2012

Editorial and Opinion pain heart past burden new-beginning

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Liza Red

You didn't fail to make me click the Like button whenever you're writing a poem. Really, that's how good you are.

As always, an inspirational poem coming from you! You know about GuiltyPleasure, right? She writes poems, too and she's also great but she has a different kind of style and I should say that you two are my top favorite poets here on Booksie!

While everything that she wrote is deep and mostly romantic, your masterpieces are inspirational which makes us see the pain of the reality yet at the end, makes us see the good behind it.

Many people that will read your poems will always find hope in your masterpieces. Your skill in writing poems are anything but God-given. ;)

I like this poem. It tells us not to look back and keep looking ahead. Because it's true, when you look back, then how will you take one step forward? You'll always be stuck in the same ground forever if you keep looking back. :D

Very inspirational.

Keep writing more poems!

XOXO,
Liza R.~

Tue, March 6th, 2012 3:02am

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WOW!!! "God-given", ha ha. you just made made my day. I read couple of poems of GuiltyPleasure, not my genre but I liked it. She has a style of her own.

Thanks for reading and appreciating it. I just got inspired from your comments for writing more. Thanks again!

xo

Mon, March 5th, 2012 9:46pm

SGBanks

Like Liza Red said very inspirational indeed and have to do with real life

Tue, March 6th, 2012 12:24pm

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Thanks :)

Tue, March 6th, 2012 4:39am

Gagan

Brother, another inspiring and very true piece of work you have displayed here. In very simple words you explain your readers, past is gone and if you want to be the master of your future you always have to be in Present.

Tue, March 6th, 2012 3:38pm

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Tue, March 6th, 2012 9:52pm

GuiltyPleasure

i totally agree. (i just shouted that in my mind) By god's grace, i have been very very lucky and happy through out my life so far (ooops already forgotten all the shocks, tears and fears hahah) Great poem :) Spread the message of hope :)

Tue, March 6th, 2012 5:39pm

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:) Thanks

Tue, March 6th, 2012 9:51pm

Tiara Vigil

Wow I totally agree al above!:) haha its wonderful I really like it it just felt so inspirational and kmu on ur poems because every time I read them I just don't want to stop I loved it!!!

Tue, March 6th, 2012 6:28pm

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thanks a lot :)

Tue, March 6th, 2012 9:49pm

glitter snow426

this is so good, very special, LOVE THIS POSITIVE ONE!

Tue, March 6th, 2012 9:33pm

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Thanks :)

Tue, March 6th, 2012 9:48pm

ashi17

Very inspiring full of positive vibes, well written. I would like to request elder sis Gideon to add this poem into FADED SCARS. It is really too good.

Wed, March 7th, 2012 12:31pm

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thanks :) I am new to this .... so what's a "FADED SCARS"? But anyways, thanks a lot :)

Wed, March 7th, 2012 6:32am

Sezan Vahpieva

really nice :))

Thu, March 8th, 2012 2:20pm

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Thu, March 8th, 2012 8:55am

Darklady

you are absolutely right about this, it's a lovely poem ans it was a pleasure to read it, somehow gave me hope.. made me think that not everything is lost ... good work

Sun, March 11th, 2012 5:53pm

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thank you so much :)

Sun, March 11th, 2012 10:40pm

Insane Membrane

great advice find the fun and the beauty in this world there is plenty of it ... the past cannot be changed so move forward in this world and in your life

Tue, March 20th, 2012 7:48am

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Tue, March 20th, 2012 2:34am