Lost..

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
a reply to the challenge of laurel
it's a 10 and i did the sonnet :D
hope you enjoy laurel :D

btw (route is pronounced like rout) it rhymes with shout.
footnote :D

Submitted: June 20, 2008

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Lost

In a mediocre world

Where temptations live about

Lived a fairly lost girl

Who believed life was in doubt

She'd open her eyes and everything curled

She'd open her mouth and there was no shout

On her right pride, pride fell out the world

On her left, hope stayed on her route

She'd wondered on and on as if in a twirl

And it kept her from being let out

Everything started to be clear and uncurl

And a light shined her way out

Everyone should look at this lost girl and stare

For she can not be compared


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