Roulette of Love

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replying to alice's challenge I took up the challenge 10 and i thought it was pretty easy

(im only 14 btw)
the allusion is about the venice walk that started the republic it's a symbol of us walking in to venice's beauty. :D

metaphor: love is the river that flows in my heart meaning that love is like a river because they both flow into something bigger :D ex: river --> sea, love --> heart
iono what happened
i just barfed up the words onto the paper :D
hope you enjoy alice! :D and everybody else :)

Submitted: June 20, 2008

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Chance of Love

I'm sitting there by the Venice River,

Looking down at my reflection,

All I can see is a blob

and a phantom of me.

In the game of chance, I will oblige to God

Where all I want to is embrace the roulette of love

Every spin makes my heart beat with nerves

Hoping it can land somewhere hopeful above.

I'm taking a walk downVeniceRoadthat started everything,

and when I take my euros down to the game of chance,

I get scared like love is making me asphyxiate.

Love constantlyhascastigation againstmy life,

As I go down that moonlit road.

Love is the river that flows in my heart.

And I'm by that river again

except this time with LOVE.


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