The Cloudburst

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic
Follows the journey of a so far unnamed main character as he searches for something to fill the hole in his soul that he feels his abusive father created. He feels like he's constantly "caught out in the rain" as he describes and longs to find a way to fix himself.

The first 10, 000 words or so of my short story. I did it fairly quickly this weekend and I'm looking for feedback, possibly tips on my writing and a name for my character. Also the title isn't finalised and I would much appreciate help with that! :)

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The Cloudburst

Submitted: September 09, 2013

Follows the journey of a so far unnamed main character as he searches for something to fill the hole in his soul that he feels his abusive father created. He feels like he's constantly Read Chapter