I Love You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

this is a long poem/note i wrote about how much i love somebody ;)

My hearts desires

has already been set
and they are completely upon you
my dreams my thoughts every
part of me wants you to be a part
of my love and constantly my
heart and mind drives me crazy
for i love you so much and
all i can and want to think about is you!

for you may not see what i see
through my eyes!?!

you are special
i wish you could have the ability
to see how practically perfect
you are to me

once in a
lifetime people finds someone like you
for you are everything to me
in the world i just can see i can search
forever but this i already know
that no one else would do
only you i want

i will give you:
my everything

my heart

my love

my whole world

even though you
already have all that because
i already gave it to you
from the moment i fell in love with you
for i couldnt control it my heart
fell for you and nobody better
it could ever had bc you have
everything that i need and want
and that is many reasons that
i love you and will for eternity

for you mean everything to me
and love you more than anyone
else in the whole world and
you are my hearts desire

I never knew i could love
someone so strongly in my life
you I lovemore thaneverything
and over a timespan the love
just grows stronger and
I love you more and more

Everything little thing
you do and everytime i learn
something new about you
i fall more in love with you

when i go around you or
the times i think of you
my feelings about you are
so strong that my:

heart accelerates
get butterflies in my stomach
and it is the most amazing
feeling in the whole world!!!

i see you and all i want it to
be with you forever because
i want you in my future
and i cannot live without you
for im so in love with you
if i ever lose you i would
die inside because you
mean everything to me
and gives me a reason to

for when i dont see
you every second i miss
you so much my heart hurts
you are my everything and
I love you so much more than
you would ever know
my feelings arent wishes
and dreams they are completely
true and reality:
I Love You

Submitted: January 31, 2010

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Most emotionally heartfelt! Thought the writing style and presentation were interesting. Well written.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

Suggestion: To make it more inviting to readers:

1. If you intended for there to be more than one verse, it would help to skip a line between intended verses.

2. Some limited punctuation might help as well.

Good! Nevertheless!

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Mon, February 8th, 2010 2:36am


thank you...and for the criticizm. i did try what you said hopefully did it right...if u ever have any spare time can you look back at it and see if it is better. but thanks so much for reading it

Sun, February 7th, 2010 10:56pm


Boy, can you pour your heart out on a page! Well done!

Sun, January 15th, 2012 11:04pm


lol thank you..glad you liked it

Mon, January 16th, 2012 12:23pm

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