Mick

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

being in jail for drinking he lands n a cell next to a guy named mick that loved to talk

people don't really know why he did the things he did, until he told me. i was brought in for drinkng and being a ass to people. The rain out side and thunder made his story more scary for me, he was already in a cell next to mines just sitting there lookng at me. I didn't say anything since i was going to sleep until i was sober and he couldn't do anything to hurt me  through the bars. As i made my way to the bed he started to ask for my name so i gave him a fake one. the crazy weirdo starts to laugh and says he would give himself a fake name too. i lay down on the lumpy bed when he tells me he gave the officers a fake name and his real name was mick something. i was too drunk and tired to gve any effort to listen to the guy, until he said he killed someone. I stiffen up which showed him he caught my attention; so he then walks to the bars that separate our cells. 

Mick "the creepy guy" tells me about how he got done killing a guy two town over and was thrown in jail for trying to rob a store. but as he robbed the store there was a cop in there so he just turned himself in without a shoot out. i then look at him and ask why did he kill the guy, he looks at me and his eyes started to fill with hate then said "looked too much like my stepdad." he said that his stepdad was a real prick that bossed him around while he layed on the couch, he also got in fist fights with him until he was kicked out. Mick said he always wanted to kill him but the guy died before he got the chance, He then tells me he killed a few men cause they looked like his stepped dad. i start to freak out because the guy was not telling a fake story as i hoped. 

he then looks at me and asks me how long i was staying in, i told him only for a day. he then said he felt like telling me about the other murders, he told me he murdered people across the country families to hobos. I just sat up on the bed and looked at him and asked if he raped girls, he looks at me and says " what? do you think i'm some kind of anmal? no, i just kill them. i don't care to rape." i start to feel a lot of rage in me but i was not going to threaten a killer. i wanted to kill this sick person as he smiled at me. i ask him why he killed them, he tells me about the first time he did it. Mick was a killer for a long time.

He told me that his first kill was a boy the same age as him when he was 14, they were playing but the kid would always cheat, so he did what he seen his stepdad would do to his mother and that was to put his hands around mick's mothers throat. As the boy fought mick for air he felt power over the kid, knowing he had the power to give the kid air or let the kid die. Mick then told me he was just a little  late on letting go so he dropped the kid in the river to make it look like he fell in. 

  i look at him head on and he stops talking and asks me if i believe him about not raping the girls. i tell him i don't want him raping any girls in my town, he then raises his right hand and says "i won't rape a single person in this town tonight" and starts to laugh. His little joke gets me standing up but he didn't care about how well i got the joke. he then starts to talk about how his power trip of killing people, saying his goal was to get one kill in every state.Getting college girls by wearing a fake cast and asking for help, asking them to help put a box in his car. Luring the men in alleys for a fake drug deal, boys and girls were with there parents when they died. he tells me about his sick idea about how he couldn't leave a kid witha dead parent so he killed them. 

 He then tells me that he would pay for a prostitute for his sexual pleasures and the kill them to rid the world of them. Mick changes the story  and tells me about a time he had to stay with a bunch of hobos in a camp on the streets. saying every night he would hear a woman get raped and that no one would help, so one night he waited to hear the first scream. once he heard it he went inside a tent the cries came from and slit a guys throat as he was on top of a woman. He starts laughing about how he killed the guy to stop the screams but the blood coming out of the guy gushing onto the woman made her scream louder. Mick told me that he got a power trip again being a hero to the camp, killing any guy that tried to rape a female but once the camp had its rape crime go down and he was not needed he left. He than say he'll head back when the rape crime picks up again. 

Hearing all this i look at him and start to think that this guy was not all there. so i asked him if he ever ate a person. he then stops and moving and says he had eaten a guy before. Right there, i knew he was not all there in the head. i thought he was just sick in the head but it turns out i was right. eating another person is something that i heard of but it was cause the person dealed with the devil. so i asked if he warshipped the devil but he says he doesn't believe in gods good or bad. Mick was a real piece of work. but eating another person can cause hm to get sick.

looking at mick i ask him when does he get out of jail, he tells me when he breaks out of prison. but what he didn't know was this was on my playhground and i didn't need him scarying my toys. so three days after i got out i bailed him out and stuck him in my basment. The poor fool didn't know i was my towns killer, and i didn't like people taking my toys if they were not me. so i stuck him down in the basement knowing no one is going to look for him. Although i couldn't say the same for all the girls i had in basement too. I then killed Mick when he got done telling me all his tricks on how to get the victimes with little work.


Submitted: June 14, 2013

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Evelina Duile

What a great twist at the end!! Very clever on how he learned from the serial killer and put it in practice on the killer!! Irony and justice, I guess. LOL! Great job!!

Thu, June 20th, 2013 7:54am

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