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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Commercial Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

winters aaaaaaaahh my favouuuuuuuurite season

Welcome to the winter with a cup of ice cream
Winds blowing, leaves rustling,
Clouds gathering on the sky
An expected rain to fall soon
And winters to arrive
The leaves it sheds, spell of dryness it casts
Signs of leaving the summer trail behind
Though it may be a bad omen to some
But, literally, I don’t mind
As the winds get colder and a slight chill hangs in the air, while your vision gets fogged and the clouds forming on the sky hiding sun from view, the leaves turning yellow ready to fall soon giving a message that winter is at your door step. Though the dryness it brings along displeses some including me, but it is a package deal. Many regard winters unlucky, bad and related to heart breaks and all the sadness, but honestly there is no such thing. Winters are just a season. And I LOVE it.
Winters are my favorite season by far. I love winter nights and I love winter days. I love the fog that registers in the morning during winter and I love winter rains!
 So now winters are here knocking at my door and I should probably welcome them with some protocol. And the best idea was a cup of ICE-CREAM.
 Crazy isn’t it? However crazier it may seem to you but that’s how I am.
 I doubt that coffee, tea, or hot chocolate or any other hot drink would give me as much pleasure as a cup of freezing, sweet, crunchy - chocolaty perhaps - ice-cream!........YUMMMYYY 
 And therefore I planned to eat ice cream on the swings (the ones in my house), embracing the cold winds and enjoying my cool cool ice-cream. But my story doesn’t end here. There were – or I should better say- are complications.
 My father refused to buy me ice cream. He also forbade me – and not just him, also my mother and grand mother- to buy one for myself. Because, my younger siblings would also ask for it and if they get it, they will probably catch flu, get cough and fall ill. So in order to keep them from getting sick I should be kept from having my wish……..Aaaaaahhh

 But even yet I haven’t lost hopes. May be, may be someday I would be able to welcome the winters the way I wan to, though a little late or may be next time. I hope I will get it my way!

Submitted: November 14, 2010

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+D this is really interesting and good !1 i love it!! xox

Sun, November 14th, 2010 12:08pm


awwwwwwww thnk yew

Sun, November 14th, 2010 4:30am

Vampire slayer

I thought that this was qutie interesting. you used some very good words and it is very well written. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done!!

Mon, November 15th, 2010 1:08am


thnk yew. loved your cmnt. thnx for reading

Mon, November 15th, 2010 2:55am


i really like it
very nicely written
looking foward to your entry
good luck :)

Mon, November 22nd, 2010 2:09pm



Tue, November 23rd, 2010 2:02am


Very interesting! I loved it.

Mon, November 22nd, 2010 3:23pm


thnk you sir

Tue, November 23rd, 2010 2:03am


Very nice! I love ice cream :P YUMMMMMMM!
And winter is your favorite season? ... Weird. Mine is summer :D
I thought this was really well-written, and it captured my interest! Great job :)
xx Paige

Tue, February 15th, 2011 12:23pm


i really appreciate your comment

Tue, February 15th, 2011 4:32am


love it xx

Sat, February 19th, 2011 2:07pm


Aha very interesting x) not many people write poetry about this

Sun, February 20th, 2011 6:07am



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