Party Night

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
Well I wrote this a few days ago its about a girl who has had a crush on this really hot guy and she thinks that he dont notice her but in reality he has always liked... not my best story but not my worst.

Submitted: November 14, 2011

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Submitted: November 14, 2011



" Pst, Pst" I looked over to see who was trying get my attention. It was Jacob, the hottest guy at school.

"Hey" He said

"Hey" I replied

"Here" Jacob handed me a folded piece of paper that was entitled 'Your Invited'

"Whats This?" I asked

"Just open it." Jacob smiled then returned back to doing his work. "For a really hot guy he is really smart" I thought. I looked back at my desk and unfolded the note.

Party: (casual Dress)

When: Friday Night

Where: Jacobs House

Time: 5:00pm - 12:00am

I kept reading the invitation and at the very end was a little green sticky note (my favorite color) attatched to the invitation that said: P.S I hope to see you there. I smiled then folded up the invitation and took out a piece of paper and wrote "I'll Be there". I folded the paper ip and threw it a t Jacob. He opens it, then looks up at me a smiles. I turn back around and gather up all my papers and walk to my teacher to turn in my work. I took one more glance in Jacobs direction, smiled then walked out. When I got outside i took my car keys out of my purse, unlocked the door and pulled out of the school parking lot. "okay get a hold yourself he's only the hottest guy at school and you've only had a crush on him since 7th grade.. No biggy" I said to myself.

I drove into my driveway and got out of my car and went straight to my room. I looked at the clock on the wall. It was 3:30 "Okay calm down you have two and half hours to get ready" i thought. I quickly shoved everything that was on my floor into one pile in the corner of my room. I strode over to my closet to find something to wear. The invitation said to dress casual. So after about 30 minutes of going through my clothes i finally decided on a pair of skinny jeans that are kind of tight around my thighs and  complements my butt, i threw on a red tank top that said "I bite" in silver letters and put on my silver flats. Satisfied with how i looked i went to the bathroom to fix my hair and makeup. I put on my foundation, mascara, and eye shadow. I took my hair out of a pony tail and let it fall over my shoulders and down my back. Deciding to keep my hair down i took some gel and schrunched my hair a little bit. To top it  all off i put on some clear lip gloss  then grabbed my purse and car keys and headed out the door.


After about a 45 minute drive i finally pulled into Jacobs house at 5:15. I looked in the rear view mirror to make sure i looked okay. i schrunched my hair one more time and put one more coat of lip gloss on and walked into Jacobs house. There was so many people here and I didnt see Jacob. Almost everyone was dancing so i made my way threw the crowd trying to find someone that I knew. Everyone kept bumping into me. I was almost to the other when someone caught me by the arm. I turned around to see Jacob smiling down at me. He wrapped me in gentle hug.

"hey" he whispered in my ear. I was so nervice all i could was smile. He took me by the hand and led me upstairs to his room. He let me walk in first so he could shut the door behind us. Jacob walked over to me, grabbed me by the waist and pushed me up against the wall. He looked me in the eyes then gentley kissed me. It was so soft so passionate. By the time he broke the kiss we were both out of breath. He nibbled at my ear then whispered

"I love you, I have always loved you. Please dont ever leave me"

"I wouldnt ever dream of leaving you" I whispered back. Jacob bent down and kissed me agin. More fiercley, i could feel the desperateness in his kiss. I loved it, and i loved him. I let myself relax and fall into his strong arms. Jacob deepened the kiss and i let him.

"so this is what it feels like to love someone" I thought......


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