Love stings

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Editorial and Opinion  |  House: Booksie Classic
Just a poem that found it's way to me during a study hall. Comment if you like or if you don't. I want some feedback. This is only my second poem. Thank you!

Submitted: April 27, 2012

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My love burns for you

Like the liquor runs down your breath

Although you hurt me

You then act as sweet as can be

I'm tired of turning the other cheek

I don't want my eyes to begin to leak

You laugh at my pain

Oh your so vain

I envy your life

With a loving wife

You tell yourself its fine

Even though my teeth grind

Do you not see the tears you left me

Or is it just as ignorant as he

Can he feel no fear

Or his leaving me here

I'm so long gone

Don't worry it wont be long

As if I could leave

My heart will always be in Tennesse.


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