Mystical Garden

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

Its a poem about a garden thats hidden from the world only those who believe in can see it.

The piercing blue water
cascades off the gleaming
smooth rocks, descending
into a pool of mystics.

The dark amber trees soar high
into the heavens,
the ample leaves whisper
sweet nothings in the air.

The radiant flowers
blanket the earth,
crimson roses wrapping
you in their charm.

A tranquil soothing breeze
mystifies the air,
ever so softly the wind
chimes a tune.

A captivating
surrounded by sparkling bugs,
in the midst of this beauty.

The magnificent book
captures her in it's
golden pages,
buried deep in the abyss.

A mystical garden so full
of poise and grace,
invisible to the naked eye,
covered by a silken sheet.

Submitted: August 11, 2007

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Just what I needed...very nice I felt like I was there and it flows so nicely.


Sun, August 12th, 2007 5:35am


Thanks so much for the postive feedback..I'll be sure to read and commkent one of yours.

Mon, August 13th, 2007 6:13pm


You draw a lovely picture of a garden full of peace, and tranquility.
Well done.

Sat, August 18th, 2007 11:44am


Thank you so much for the great compliment.

Sat, August 18th, 2007 11:28am


Wonderful imagery. I saw every bit. I really like it. The fact that you didn't feel compelled to ryhme is an added bonus.

Tue, April 15th, 2008 6:37am


Thank you so much for the feedback..I re4ally dont like to rhyme in my poems plus its a ig headache trying to find words that rhyme and sound good together lol.

Tue, April 15th, 2008 10:40pm

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