The Night Shall Wait Again, Be Free, Ending a War.

The Night Shall Wait Again.

Above the broad horizon from afar,
The dawn's light streaks the sky a lovely rose,
When such a believed tale is not far,
The night rushes up once more,

The screaming of the dead,
It's horrorful tales all woven in blood,
All broken hearted and filled with sorrow,
The night's heavenly shadows await,

The breaking of dawn,
It's lovely reveal,
Let's all revel in it's stream of colour,
The night shall wait again.


Be Free.

A colourful sky awakens The,
It's heavenly light shining upon the Sea,
Where thy maiden sleeps in a watery bed,
Her hair ; like fire is red,
Whilst they roam in search of gems,
They pluck thy roses from thy stems,
Throwing them into thy sea,
They set thy maiden free.


Ending a War.

Washing away all sorrow,
New blood is shed,
Your heart i borrow,
Their life-blood is bled,
Upon the ever-changing soil,

Can forgiveness ever truly reign ?
When fighting for country is always in vain ?
Pull away from the war,
Let freedom revive thy nations floor,
Leave thy enemy to wait for death,
Whilst we await our nations last breath,
War leaves only prints on a scroll,

We end this fight, we end this War.

Submitted: September 20, 2009

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Kathleen Oakwood

And you say your work "sucks" ??!! It just doesn't. At all.
*offers packet of cookies*

In fact, you write very well and you have plenty of talent. You convey language and emotion well in your writing, and you express passionately and genuinely. That is what its all about, and you do it well.

So I would rather not hear the "my work sucks" thing again, from you, thank you!
-Or I will be back to collect the packet of cookies!

All three pieces in here were written extremely well. Your work is something you should be feeling proud of. :)

Mon, September 21st, 2009 3:09am


Thank you, i appreciate this, and well i usually think my work sucks because i guess i'm just unconfident or something, but i'll be sure to keep the warning in mind as for the cookies. - *Eats cookies quickly* There.

Mon, September 21st, 2009 1:04pm


really liked this well writen great poem got my like it vote sj

Tue, September 22nd, 2009 12:16pm


Thank you, i appreciate that :)

Tue, September 22nd, 2009 1:03pm

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