Lisa P.O.V
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I closed my eyes, lying on the kitchen floor, blood seeping from a dozen wounds on my body. I could hear the
man that had abducted me continue to yell and i wished i could have been deaf. He called me dirty names and i
cringed as i heard his heavy boots move towards me. The dagger in his hand, the light reflecting and casting a
glare at me. I shut my eyes tighter. "Coward !" he spat. "Get up and fight me, struggle for your freedom !" he told
me, his voice raised in disgust. I closed my eyes but reluctantly obeyed, i did not want to die although at the same
time i did. The pain of my wounds was much to much, the non dried blood dripped to the ground as i got to a
shaky stand. "Good girl," he cooed in a sickly sweet voice, "Now fight me," he ordered. "Here" he tossed me the
dagger and i tried to catch it but i missed and it sliced a deep gash down my arm. I hissed in pain, trying to stop
from screaming out and i bent down and picked the dagger up. He smiled in a cruel way, "Come on then" he
encouraged me.
I looked at him, trying to judge where to stabb him. I began to lope towards him. He looked prepared, like i was no
threat at all. He smiled, and that drove me on. I threw the dagger down, stabbing him in the chest, but he grabbed
the dagger and switched it around and stabbed me in the gut. I doubled over in pain, he laughed hartily. "Oops.
Did i forget to tell you that i can fight back ?" he asked, raising an eyebrow. I screamed as he kicked me in the
ribs. "Leave me alone ! Please !" i begged him. He ignored my plea and sat down next to me. He grabbed my
hand even as i tried to pull away. He grabbed the dagger and sliced it across my finger, blood swelled from the
wound and he raised my hand to meet his lips. He licked my fingers, sucking at the blood.
I moaned and tried pulling away, "Leave me alone !" i cried, i tried to reach for is dagger that he had set down next
to his boot. He immediatly dropped my hand and slapped me across the face. "You want this ?" he asked in an
evil way. "I'll give it to you" he snarled. He grabbed the dagger and before i could pull away he stabbed it into my
heart. I gasped in pain, my vision dimmed. The last thing i saw was his beautiful face, even though he is my killer,
twisted into a grimace of joy and lust. "Goodbye, dearie" he whispered before everything went to black.
Jonathan P.O.V
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I looked at the dying girl, blood pooling around the motionless heap. "Goodbye, dearie" i whispered to her. Great,
he thought, now i have to dispose of the body. I smiled as i remembered how much of a fight she had put up, until
she had been beaten too much. My heart twisted with some new emotion that i haven't felt for years. Pity. I got up
and grabbed the dagger and rinsed off the blood, as i looked at the girl's body i realized that i had fallen in love
with the dark raven haired girl. "That cannot be, my soul is crowded with darkness, love does not exist" he
whispered to himself. I grabbed at her hair and cut off a wad, "I shall remember you, dearie" he murmured. "Don't
forget me, even if you lye in a dark abyss where nothing matters." he hissed, "I will meet with you again." he
whispered to her motionless body.
Lisa P.O.V
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As darkness enveloped me, i shivered delicately. I heard his whispers of promise, "I will meet with you again."
those words echoed as my life slowly faded. Then i lay there motionless, in a crumpled heap.
Death is peaceful, but when a whispered promise is heard it clings to you and your death brings you down to the
earth, down to the core.
Down to hell.
Submitted: August 10, 2009
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Comments
Eeep! Dark stuff, Mythic...I like it! x] Seriously, the detailing, the emotions. One word:
Brilliant (and a smiley face) =D
Yipe! Very dark and scary, I can't wait to read your entry for my challenge!
Mon, September 7th, 2009 8:24pmooh, nice. im in a dark mood. :P it kind of freaked me out but i really did like the storyline. :) thumbs up
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i don't like blood and stuff but i thought it was really good!
Mon, August 10th, 2009 9:07pmAuthor
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Wow, thanks. I didn't think i should put tooo much gore and stuff in so i kinda improvd. Anyway i'm glad you like it, i made it pretty fast :)
Mon, August 10th, 2009 2:23pm