Still hard to believe

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i wrote this poem about one year back when my best friend told me that he has been left in lurch by the one he has always loved, the one he gave four long years of his life, only to get a literal 'slap' on his face...and the girl just disappeared, leaving behind nothing...nothing at all...No reason why..why she did that! For this.... i Hate HER!
The part in blue, is the updated version...something i would want to tell her one day if ever i meet her!

Submitted: October 11, 2011

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Submitted: October 11, 2011



Still hard to believe that you left me,

Strong was my faith that you are there for me.

“I love you and this is what matters!”

How foolish was I to believe you!

I don’t know where I went wrong

I don’t know what resulted into your decision.

But I do know that I loved you more than anything else.

Everything was so perfect…

You, your breathtaking smile, your dazzling breath,

Your mesmerizing scent, your magnificent eyes…

Human you were for everyone else,

Yet for me, you were My Angel!

Still incredible to believe why you left me.

Do I deserve this?

Ought I to be left in the lurch?

I don’t know….

But I do know that your presence will be missed

As you colonized my life, my every breath

And now you are gone…

Away from my sight…

Away from my life…

I don’t know if I’ll ever be able to forget you,

And I know that you will also never be able to forget me

But one thing I do promise you…

I’ll be happy without you.

You went away from him,

He was never the same,

You stole from him


His smile, his happiness, his peace of mind


Everytime he talks, you are there,

Everytime he smiles, you are there,

You are gone, but you are not.

I wonder, what went in your mind,

I wonder, what a FOOL could you be

To hurt the one,

Who gave you everything,

Who made you who you are today.

What a fool you were!

But now, he's back,

As the one i've always known,

Cheerful, playful, happy!

Promise, he did make to you,

Happy he'll be always...ALWAYS,

With or without you!

I'm there for him,

Forever, to keep him happy,

To find him the happiness he deserves.

Often i wonder, What went wrong?

But then, it's alright,

He's happy, even without you!

You have never been his world,

YOu can never be either...

He's out...searching for his self,

Never to turn back again to you,

That's what you deserve i guess!

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