MY HEART IS SHATTERED

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"Did you love me" "Did you even care, that you broke my heart with the force of a sledgehammer?"

My tears, dropped silently onto  the wooden floor, You said you love me, or do you? Did you? Did you pretend my love was a worthless bauble that   could be thrown away? Did you convince me with sweet words and chocolate that I was the only one in your heart? Then why, did you walk away? Why did you crush my heart with branding words, or rather silence? Now I sit here crying and moaning, wings clipped, eyes red,  with my heart shattered intointo a thousand pieces.  My heart that I can no longer can pierce back together. My tears dropped silently onto the wooden floor.

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Submitted: May 11, 2008

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apodiform

wow, you really dug deep for that one! I could feel the hurt and the anguish pouring out from your words! ~Em

Mon, May 12th, 2008 2:58am

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Thankyou! This means a lot to me since I'm new to this poetry thing. Thanks for reading!

Mon, May 12th, 2008 7:53pm

Keepers River

I'm loving this! I can't wait to read more of your work!

Tue, May 13th, 2008 1:54pm

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Thankyou!! And I as well love your writing. I really like your "Fear is Everywhere"!

Tue, May 13th, 2008 4:10pm

IcyDibs402

I like how you started with

'My tears, dropped silently onto the wooden'

and ended with it too. Interesting poem but it makes me sad.

Sun, May 25th, 2008 8:58pm

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Thankz! Coincidence, i just commented on your poems!! That's what it was directed for., Glad the results are positive.

Sun, May 25th, 2008 2:08pm

indiefreak

I can relate to your poem. Though i never felt it(i've many friends who've gotten into this situation).Great poem:)

Sun, June 1st, 2008 1:50pm

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Thankyou, although I've never been in the situation mentioned in the poem, but ahahaha, I don't plan to be either.

Sun, June 8th, 2008 1:45am

justonenight

Lovely emotion and passion. Amazing! I love this.

Thu, June 5th, 2008 3:06am

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thanx! It took a long time writing this>_

Sun, June 8th, 2008 1:42am

GoldenStar

wow , this poem makes me feel like i'm that very person and yeah.wow

Thu, July 23rd, 2009 3:18pm

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THANKEE YOU! lol, although i'd rather not be that person in the poem

Thu, July 23rd, 2009 11:18am

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