another poem this one i thought of in 2010

Wouldn’t it be great to be able to fly!

To soar up high where the birds don’t cry!

Where everything is pure and high .

Where you glide with the wind and time dose not pass you by.

Time can go by but the birds in the sky who know how to fly do not worry or cry.

They just fly and let the time go by .

They follow the seasons as they pass by and go into new sky to fly.

Oh how wondrous it would be if I learned to fly

Submitted: October 11, 2012

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Hi there:) I guess it would be great to be able to fly like birds. Good start but we must remember that we should always have room for improvement. Keep writing and you'll be able to hone your skill in writing. By the way, you might want to change the spelling of "sour" into "soar".
Keep me updated if you post a new one.


Thu, October 11th, 2012 8:33am

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