A short fragment of a story

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
I really want to get opinions on my writing style,and if i managed in this short passage to make you want to read more.

Submitted: February 09, 2012

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Submitted: February 09, 2012







For Ever Land


imagine a world where




“He's unconscious” said Arthur with a disappointed voice.

“Guardians are getting weaker and weaker...This is probably it” he looked down.

“That's enough!Arthur” yelled Elizabeth.

Arthur kept looking down,the tears began to flow.

Suddenly the room was filled with silence,not the awkward type,but the full of meaning type.

“Arthur” said elizabeth with a soft motherly voice.

“This may be our last zenkai togther,it has to be a happy one,please do not cry” she smiled “Okay?”

A small light penetrated from the window and lit Elizabeth face,it was almost as if they planned it out.


“How did I get here?where am I?What happened?” the guardian shot the questions one after the other.

“Well...” Said Arthur. “ Look outside”


The guardian looked outside,only to find out he's









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