A Haiku I wrote for my friend's English Project. She got a better grade than I did. The One I turned him for myself is included below it.

Lo, sere autumn leaf,

Parched veins, hung with many hues,

crumbles, frail to touch.

 

 

Earth Worm, mould creeper,

ingesting death, cowering

down in blinding night.


Submitted: February 29, 2008

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Jenangelx3

wow, very well written. amazing how you got a worse grade

Fri, February 29th, 2008 4:20am

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Yeah, I actually regret having written that one for her. O well. Thank You for the comment. :)

Thu, February 28th, 2008 8:34pm

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Hey Narduchil! Sorry I havent read much of your stuff in a while.
These were great you know? I would regret writing it for her too!
I REALLY liked them.
:DDDDD

Tue, April 22nd, 2008 1:26am

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