An air there laid upon that place
sepulchral somber shorn of grace
nigh they drew upon the banks
Of Valantë and to their knees they sank
and Hildrós eldest of the lot
spoke of words forgotten not
"Forgive us Ürwe for the sins,
of our father, please spare our kin.
Defer thy chagrin if thou wilt
and loose thy grip upon the hilt
of Gúrgarnil the dire blade
and may thine ire at last fade."
But Ürwe trembled and he spake
and in hsi voice the earth did quake
"Pity upon thee i shall not give
long the years i gave ye to live
but if ye wish to save thine heirs
then thine lives forsake thither, there
for lost ye come before my throne
i who am death; ghastly alone
in yore lied to me thine sire
and thou shalt endure mine ire
flit thine souls unto the shore
lost now thereafter, forevermore
thus beneath the starry eaves did stand
they side by side hand in hand
when from the earth there did arise
a tumult risen to the skies
and sad the brood of Boibelóth spake
"Farewell the world which we forsake"
and lo as if from mystic night
had caused them then to sing aright
the heart of Ürwe mellow made
dissolved the oath Boibelóth laid
Alas in whole it was too late
to undo what was done by fate.
Their feet did harden upon the ground
and up they threw a horrid sound.
as limbs and skin of flesh ere born
were of their living matter shorn
of stone were made the children then
and cry did Ürwe sudden when.
A lasting tear slipped past their cheek
gelded now forever bleak.
No joy there came unto that home,
where their forlorn spirits roam.
the land is silent the sward is dun
all lies fallow beneath the sun.
For the children died an evil death,
cursing Aman on their last breath.
Submitted: September 02, 2007
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orynnfireheart
I like it, though I think you stretched a couple of times to rhyme. Still, it was excellently written and told an epic story. Great job and keep up the good work!
Sun, September 2nd, 2007 2:58amAuthor
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Thank you for your comment and i agree several times i might have strecthed a little to rhyme ^_^ however i plan to fix that now thank you for your advice.
Sat, September 1st, 2007 8:23pm