Don't Make Me Cry

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Don't make me cry. Non-rhyming love poem.

When I'm down
lift me up
Don't leave me here
Don't make me cry

When I'm sad
make me glad
Don't leave me here
Don't make me cry

When I'm lost
help me out
Don't leave me here
Don't make me cry

When I'm free
come with me
Don't stay in that world
Don't make me cry

When you're leaving
take me with you
Don't leave me here
Don't make me cry


Submitted: January 19, 2009

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Angelsong

simple, elegant, and sweet...i like it ^_^

Mon, January 19th, 2009 3:32am

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Oh, that's sweet too! Thanks so much for your wonderful comment! =]

Sun, January 18th, 2009 7:42pm

Chiqui

WoW! very touching Natasha13, nicely penned. Smiles Chiqui

Fri, January 30th, 2009 7:13am

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Thanks, Chiqui! I also LOVE your Gay and Lesbian poem. It was fantastic!

Fri, January 30th, 2009 11:20pm

FairyWings

I could relate to your poem. This entry is very simple yet it hits home. I like how the last sentence is kept consistent in every stanza. That gives the impact & tone to your poem. ^.^

Thu, May 7th, 2009 12:36am

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