As i'm looking through my window,

As I'm looking through my window,

The world outside so free,

With beautiful blue skies,

Seems so far away from me.

 

A thousand miles in distance,

Stands between me and you,

And all that I can hope,

Is this journey will be ended soon.

 


Submitted: June 21, 2007

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Eraser

lovely poem. i can sense the longing.

Thu, June 21st, 2007 10:53pm

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Thankyou. I'm only begining but enjoying it loads.

Thu, June 21st, 2007 5:58pm

EdwardJBradleySr

Natfink:

Beautifully expressed feelings of fondness enduring absence of one's beloved. Liked it. A lot.

Use of looking "out through a window" was most effective in creating both the mood and in drawing a parallel between one's emotions and the physical world.


Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Thu, June 21st, 2007 11:13pm

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Thankyou. I'm only begining but enjoying it loads.

Thu, June 21st, 2007 6:00pm

Kate

well written, I like the feeling of longing xxx

Fri, June 22nd, 2007 3:15pm

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sorry it has taken so long for me to get back to you, thank you for your comment, I'm only just getting started but I enjoy it.

Wed, June 27th, 2007 12:55pm

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