You're with her.and your other partner....


 You're with her

and your other partner

hugged your lover

in front of her

twice,your a broker

and don't you ever

hope we'll stay forever

because it's just not working for her

it's not getting better

stop acting like a fooler

because the water

of life,is not always cooler.


Now you know the tention

you'll pay more attention

my head is full of interrogation

don't make me turn them to a termination

your favorite word is action

mine is affection

always hoping for passion

but you never feel the sensation

feel like my heart is in suspention

asking when is the preparation

but never reach the conclusion


Submitted: November 29, 2013

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I would like all of you guys to tell me what you think..And tell me of course how much you guys like y'all...peace out.

Sat, November 30th, 2013 12:19am

Criss Sole

Booksie doesn't let me use the 'like' button, but I enjoyed reading this poem. I really liked the rhyming in this.

Wed, December 4th, 2013 6:00pm

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