;Look Right Through Me.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
(I don't know how to summarize it so no description- sorry).
When I read this, it feels unfinished to me (but I wrote it anyway because It was just on my mind) so could you guy's please give me feedback on it. Thanks xx

Submitted: July 04, 2011

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Look Right Through Me

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You see the slight smile on my face,

As I'm staring off in space.

Look right thorugh me;

Ignore the saddness in my eyes.


When I say I'm okay,

Yet my face srceams I don't feel that way.

Look right through me;

Ignore the fact I'm telling lies.


When you take my hand,

And see slits you don't understand.

Look right through me;

Ignore the scars made as the blood slowly dries.


You see me doubled over in pain,

Your face a picture of disdain .

Look right through me;

Ignore my cries as my soul slowly dies.


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