"Children of the Night"

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
We are invited to a day of a child of the night's life. From the moment it is awakened it takes us around till its slumber.
This is actually a short story, by no means is it a novel. It is only about 8 pages long. Which is about normal size for short stories. It only has one concept, limited characters, and it is only trying to tell one story. I am posting this up as a novel because I fear eight pages is too long to read on booksie without being able to turn pages. It looks terribly long and I assume it would deter anyone from reading a story, with text that just seems to scroll down on your screen for eternity. Format is very important to a story, but it shouldn't obscure the story, which in my case would horrible interfere with.
I would really appreciate comments, reviews and honest opinions!
Please let me know what you think!
Thanks for reading in advance!

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Submitted: November 25, 2009

We are invited to a day of a creature of the night's life. From the moment it is awakened it takes us around till it's slumber.
This is actually a short story, by no means is it a novel. It is only about 8 pages long. Which is about normal size for short shorty. It only has one concept, limited characters, and it is only trying to tell one story. I am posting this up as a novel because I fear eight pages is too long read on booksie without being able to turn pages. It looks terribly long and I assume it would deter anyone from reading text that just seemed to scroll down on your screen for eternity. Format is very important to a story, but it shouldn't obscure the story, which in my case would horrible interfere with.
I would really appreciate comments, reviews and honest opinion!
Thanks for reading in advance!
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Submitted: November 25, 2009

CHILDREN OF THE NIGHT She flung her feet off the floor and eyed her chamber. Her basin and pitcher of water stood there on a hutch.... Read Chapter

Submitted: November 25, 2009

CHILDREN OF THE NIGHT A black wolf slowly wandered in the forest, without leaving much of a trail. It sniffed the ground and looked a... Read Chapter

Submitted: November 25, 2009

CHILDREN OF THE NIGHT By the time the Ruler inhaled the more of opium through her full, and cherry colored lips she was through worki... Read Chapter

Submitted: November 25, 2009

THE CHILDREN OF THE NIGHT The Full Moon grew the right shade and the right size. The sky was turning black from midnight blue signali... Read Chapter

Submitted: November 25, 2009

CHILDREN OF THE NIGHT Alas it was the time to hunt, under the open sky, with the protection of the full moon in the ancient ruins of ... Read Chapter

Submitted: November 25, 2009

CHILDREN OF THE NIGHT The Divine Ruler which altered reality, and brought a greater mystery to their thousands of myths. A Queen that... Read Chapter