Mr. Whiskers cares (chapter 3 of My Backwards Fairytale)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is the third part of "My Backwards Fairytale".

I awoke in a daze. "Where am I?" I thought as I looked around the unfamiliar room. Just then, the same black-haired boy from earlier walked into the room. "I thought you said you could take care of yourself." He stated. Although, to my surprise, he didn't sound the least bit smug. In fact, he seemed worried! "Thank you Mr. Whisk--- O.k., you seriously need to tell me your name." I said. He looked at me, perplexed, and then simply answered "My name is Akimitsu." After He was certain I was o.k., he gave me a tour of his hometown. It would have been great. But, since everyone decided to gawk at me like I was an alien, it ended up being very awkward. "Oh my,, what strange clothes." An old woman whispered. "They're saying that she resembles Hisae-sama, but I don't believe it. She's way too ugly." Whispered another woman. I clenched my fists, fighting the urge to beat the women to a bloody pulp. "Don't listen to them, they're just jealous, you're really pretty you know." Akimitsu reassured me. Upon hearing that compliment, my face began to redden. "By the way Akimitsu, who is Hisae-sama?" I queried. He then began to tell me her tale.
Flash back: Hisae-sama's point of view:
Chaos filled the town as the terrible monsters ran rampant. The streets were flooded with people trying to escape, but it was all for naught. Dozens of people were dying every minute and I could stand by no longer. I grabbed my sword and left the palace, determined to defeat the demons of the zodiac. "Hisae-onee-san, don't go! You at least must stay safe!"  My younger sister tried to convince me to stay, but I refused. "Akari, if I truly was a good ruler, then I would, without hesitation, sacrifice my life for this kingdom." I stated calmly. For I knew that my fate was sealed, but I also knew that if I was going to die, so were the demons of the zodiac. I fought them one by one, making sure to slice through their hearts so they wouldn't be able to regenerate. Then, he appeared, the man who had brought those damned creatures upon us. He still looked the same as I remembered. His eyes were pale blue and he had pitch black hair with cat's ears to match.
-End flash back:
He stopped there, an expression of sadness beginning to take place. "It was my father who summoned the demons of the zodiac and caused Hisae-sama to perish. That is why I've dedicated my life to serving and protecting her. That is why I will never let anything harm you Kaori-sama!" His expression then changed from sad to determined, and in that instant, I realized how beautiful his ruby eyes really were.

Submitted: December 13, 2008

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OMG is she going to get with him?? what about ryo???? UPDATE!!!!!
Katx :)

Sat, December 13th, 2008 10:16pm


Mwa ha ha ha!!! You'll have to wait and see.

Sat, December 13th, 2008 8:49pm


Holy moly! UPDATE! I need to know what happens next!

Mon, December 15th, 2008 4:05am


O.k., I'll be sure to update just for you! ^_^

Mon, December 15th, 2008 1:26pm

aria aiedail

awwh i like 'mr. whiskers' ^.^

Mon, December 15th, 2008 10:43pm


Ha ha ha! I'm sure he'd like you too.

Tue, December 16th, 2008 12:36am

little bee

Aww, Mr. Whiskers is cute.

Tue, December 16th, 2008 3:30am


Thank you! And she isn't exactly over him yet, you'll find that out in future chapters. *_^

Tue, December 16th, 2008 12:39am

yuu shindemura

he he i still remember how i can see Kaori first met a demon and then froze! it's so MOEtic!

gomen ne neji-chan...i'm a huge fan of moe, hehe as you can see my drawings are even moe-illustrations. ;)

(ok, for others who might read this and would say i'm talking alien here, here's the def of terms: ^.^

MOE= a girl or known as "bishuojo" who is helpless and weak, but this made her very cute and delectable! as if you can't help yourself wanting to hug or care for her. there are lots more of MOE varieties, thus this is mostly termed up as moe complex.

MOE illustrations= drawing styles similar to Haruhi Suzumiya or Shana of Shakugan no name a few. this style refers to bigger eyes of the character, well-crafted hairs, and seems to look like a teenager than a regular woman. well, they are mostly teens but the way you see them, they seem to have smaller bodies despite they are teens.)



Thu, January 29th, 2009 2:12pm


Ah, so you like weak girls? Alot of people find them asnnoying...Hey, wouldn't Haruno Sakura be considered a moe character-You know, BEFORE shippuden.

Thu, January 29th, 2009 1:30pm

yuu shindemura

well they are great! super! hehe esp when how they would curl or feel guilty over their clumsiness or weakness--kyaa! kawaii!!!

hm, nope she's not, though sakura kinomoto would be the moe. ;)

sakura haruno is just weak by her abilities, but her personality is more of a TSUNDERE. you know girls that wouldn't admit their feelings or takes a lot of time to admit it.

some examples of moe are: miyuki takara of lucky star, mikuru asahina of haruhi suzumiya, sakura kinomoto of cardcaptor sakura, yomiko readman of read or die, mizuho kazami of onegai sensei, and haruka nogizaka of nogizaka haruka no himitsu.

some examples of tsundere are: rin tohsaka of fate/stay night, shana of shakugan no shana, louise de la valliere of zero no tuskaima, nagi sanzenin of hayate no gotoku, kaname chidori of fullmetal panic.

well, um....those. those examples, sakura isn't really a moe. ;)


Fri, January 30th, 2009 1:53pm


Ahh, I see. I just thought she was 'cause she's weak, but then again....I just think she's a nagging Bycicle! (My way of saying "bitch")

Fri, January 30th, 2009 2:19pm

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