Be Sure To Comment

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
A poem about you commenting on this poem. Inspired by the people who seem desperate to get comments, and my friend telling me about a poem like this. Enjoy -- and don't forget to comment!!

Submitted: May 17, 2008

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Submitted: May 17, 2008

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Please would you comment on this poem?

It's the only reason that I show 'em.

I would be so very happy if you did,

Since I am nothing but a small kid.

I believe a comment would be very kind.

Critisize so this can be refined,

Make sure you leave no doubt,

About whether this poem is great or far-out.

So I ask of you once more,

Please be sure,

To leave a comment,

So my time was well spent.


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