Forever And After My Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

I wrote this a while ago ..I hope you like it :)

She was a troubled girl
Who loved him, missed him madly
Her wish was to be with him
He was a troubled boy
Who missed her, loved her madly
His wish was to be with her
They waited for so long ..
Their time was up..and they couldn’t be together
But a miracle happened they got together in the end…
They were buried together..

Submitted: May 05, 2009

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wow i tough it would be a happy end at the end. you totally got me on that twist. LOVED IT! Dark, very dark

Wed, May 6th, 2009 9:19am


Thank you so much..I really love your writings as well..
The Promised Suicidal is great :)

Thu, May 7th, 2009 12:12am


that was freakin AWESOME!!! i specially loved the last line "they were buried together..." keep it up :D

Fri, May 8th, 2009 2:28am


Thank you very much, glad you liked it :D

Fri, May 8th, 2009 2:08am

loveable but not 4 u

i can relate to all but the last line
there was a guy that was out of my age range
and i got him
in the end
not the other girls that wanted him i got him
i lost him but i will still get him back
i will get the girls back for what they done to him
i will always have him and no one can change that ever
all i have to say for those girls is
they better sleep with one eye open at all times
cause if they dont no one will have them
even though they wont be missing much

Mon, June 8th, 2009 7:35pm


go get him girl :)

Mon, June 8th, 2009 2:32pm

MoNicA sToDaRd LoVes VAMpires

what?? dont get it??


Mon, July 27th, 2009 8:27pm


it's about a girl and a boy who fall inlove and because of some things they can't be together but in the end they get burried together so they can stay together forever :)

Mon, July 27th, 2009 1:52pm

Dead nothingness

Aww :( This is really sad..But very nice!

Fri, August 14th, 2009 8:37pm


thank you =D

Fri, August 14th, 2009 2:33pm

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