Submitted: May 05, 2009
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that was freakin AWESOME!!! i specially loved the last line "they were buried together..." keep it up :D
Fri, May 8th, 2009 2:28am
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Thank you very much, glad you liked it :D
Fri, May 8th, 2009 2:08am
i can relate to all but the last line
there was a guy that was out of my age range
and i got him
in the end
not the other girls that wanted him i got him
i lost him but i will still get him back
i will get the girls back for what they done to him
i will always have him and no one can change that ever
all i have to say for those girls is
they better sleep with one eye open at all times
cause if they dont no one will have them
even though they wont be missing much
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go get him girl :)
Mon, June 8th, 2009 2:32pm
what?? dont get it??
good
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it's about a girl and a boy who fall inlove and because of some things they can't be together but in the end they get burried together so they can stay together forever :)
Mon, July 27th, 2009 1:52pm
Aww :( This is really sad..But very nice!
Fri, August 14th, 2009 8:37pm
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thank you =D
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wow i tough it would be a happy end at the end. you totally got me on that twist. LOVED IT! Dark, very dark
Wed, May 6th, 2009 9:19am~Jenn
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Thank you so much..I really love your writings as well..
Thu, May 7th, 2009 12:12amThe Promised Suicidal is great :)