Queen Of Ice

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This me..Every day

Queen of ice
 
She stands there...all alone
She notices their stares
But she doesn’t care
Her heart is frozen
It’s made of ice
A perfect ice statue
She’s so cold…she can’t feel her body
The only thing left of her is her mind
She created a world of her own
Where there’s no one but her
Where she can’t ever get broken or hurt
And evertime the cold wind blows
She closes her eyes
And she’s not there anymore
She’s in her own world of dreams
Where she can’t ever get broken or hurt…


Submitted: May 07, 2009

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JenDamsel

if this is you, we are very much alike.
Another great job!
~Jenn

Fri, May 8th, 2009 6:57am

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Thank you sooo much..It means the world to me that some one actually liked my poem :)

Fri, May 8th, 2009 1:58am

Rainbow Rider

Thats how I feel some days. Its not like we can do that all the time.

Wed, May 13th, 2009 2:55pm

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I know what you mean, sometimes it can really get to you..
Thank you so much for commenting :)

Wed, May 13th, 2009 9:03am

Gothalicious

I feel like that a lot. This si a very emotional poem. I like it

Thu, May 14th, 2009 10:44am

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I'm glad you like it :)

Thu, May 14th, 2009 7:17am

Amy2609

...Poor Neno DX

It must be horrid to live a life, withdrawn from the world.

Though, I understand where you're coming from with this. I too feel like this sometimes -_-

Sun, May 24th, 2009 1:34pm

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Thank you..and it is hard but it's just the way it is and i have accepted that fact a long time ago but i just thought i would show the world how i feel :)

Mon, May 25th, 2009 4:42am

loveable but not 4 u

i know people that are like that and the ones that think they arent that way are the main ones who get broken and hurt
i know because
i was one of them
and i changed myself
so i can handle getting hrt and broken the way that i am posed to
i tlk to someone

Mon, June 8th, 2009 7:39pm

MoNicA sToDaRd LoVes VAMpires

aww amazing me too!

Mon, July 27th, 2009 8:26pm

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Thank you =D

Mon, July 27th, 2009 1:52pm

Dead nothingness

This is really good.I love the subject.. :( So true...

Fri, August 14th, 2009 8:39pm

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thank you so much :)

Fri, August 14th, 2009 2:33pm

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