this a poem i wrote about my feelings when i was going through some hard times

i want to love

but i can't

i want to forgive

but how

i don't know

i want to forget

but i won't

i want to live my life

but i refuse

but i'm trapped

i want to fly into  the world

but i am afaid to fall

i want to love

but  people refuse to love me

i want to be go away

but i am stuck in this life

but someday i'll have all

those things i want


Submitted: March 19, 2007

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autumnevers

That was Amazing!!

Mon, March 19th, 2007 9:06pm

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thanks

Mon, March 19th, 2007 3:26pm

EdwardJBradleySr

princess onika auguste:

Well written. Nicely expressed feelings of futility. St. Lucia must be a great place to be living while waiting.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Mon, March 19th, 2007 10:06pm

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thank you. saint-lucia is a lovely place.

Mon, March 19th, 2007 3:31pm

Just Dead

Very nice, flows easily. Nice use of empathy :3

Tue, April 10th, 2007 11:09pm

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thsnk you

Wed, April 11th, 2007 3:03pm

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