Submitted: April 21, 2011
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Decent twist on the usual vampiric stuff.
Well written and is actually a tad bit frightening, but also fairly realistic... Well as realistic as red eyed creatures can be, but the characters interacted well.
Overall I liked it. >;)
wow loved it please update me on anything else you have ! x chloe x :)
Fri, April 22nd, 2011 5:02pmI'm going to be honest & say this is probabaly the best novel or Short Story that i have read throughout the whole of the website. Your very talented ! :)
Sat, April 23rd, 2011 6:18pmLike the last short story, this is great, very well written and yes, horror really is your thing, these really are great ideas! please kmu on anything knew you mgiht have! ~xoxo
Sun, April 24th, 2011 5:14pmCreepy...love it!!!
Mon, April 25th, 2011 12:54amNinja Dexter of the Forgotten Souls
This is really good and interesting. I wish you wrote more so we could find out more.
Wed, April 27th, 2011 1:50amoh wow thats gonna give me nightmares. amazing! i wish i could write that well :D i love it
you should so continue this story! ik its a short story, but still! i loved it!
Mon, May 9th, 2011 3:43amawesome!!! kindof scary but still swesome!
Mon, June 6th, 2011 3:31amWow, a terrorizing story...
Liked it...
Keep writing and Kmu.
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You should really write horror, it's your thing, I can tell. This piece is amazingly written!! I wish it was a full novel so I can find out more! But hey, well done! Love it!!! Seriously do!
Thu, April 21st, 2011 2:21pmAuthor
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Thank you! That's so nice :) I know, it was originally supposed to be a novel but I formatted it into a short story.
Thu, April 21st, 2011 2:21pm