The Nonexistent Listener

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Why I don't share my feelings with anybody. Hope you enjoy.

So many thoughts

In my head

Wanting to spill

But silent instead

Deep down

Hidden beneath

Are feelings

Worries

Fears

But no one

Not anybody

Has ears


Submitted: August 25, 2013

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smircle

Keeping all your problems to yourself, letting them pile up without telling anyone is never a good thing; but sometimes you just don't have anyone who will listen. This is to the point, short and flows well. I like it, good job :)

Tue, August 27th, 2013 5:24pm

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Thank you so much! :)

Tue, August 27th, 2013 2:28pm

CZR

Well, it is not always true that you have no one to talk to. It is Human Hubris or fear that prevent us from articulating these thoughts. This is a fair depiction on what goes for such individuals. Well-done!

Thu, September 19th, 2013 12:37pm

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Thank you!!!! :)

Thu, September 19th, 2013 1:32pm

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