Hope At The End Of The Tunnel

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Religion and Spirituality  |  House: Booksie Classic

Sunshine provides me hope...[The Booksie spiritual masterpiece of the season]---a short poem to sit back relax, enjoy and think...


I woke up a damp, gloomy day,
With a sense of despair and loss.
Things hadn't happened my way,
It had turned worse and so cross!
But as I opened my window,
Then I saw a sight,
Which rather shook me with delight.alt
It was the sunshine which was so beautiful and bright!
The rays kissed me and filled me with hope.
Then I knew that I had nothing to lose
As God had given me everything!
So I happily opened my mouth to sing
The sweet song of joy which is in me springing
That tells me to keep on hoping!
That tells me to keep on hoping!


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Submitted: November 20, 2008

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angellynn

Very good! God always brings us hope, and sunshine.
Rays of joy, and peace of mind. Well done.
angellynn.

Thu, November 20th, 2008 2:15pm

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The Encourager

Very good. I have to agree. God always brings us hope.

Thu, November 20th, 2008 5:59pm

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dmorales2008

Wow! Awesome... I can totally relate to this... there's something about God... that just gives us that fresh new hope for each day...

Thu, November 20th, 2008 6:22pm

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JerLies

very good idea, though I think it could use some work in smoothing it out a bit. Lovely little bit.

Thu, November 20th, 2008 8:35pm

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smilingslp

I can relate to being touched by natural entities of the universe. They are constant reminders and amazing sources of positive energy.

Fri, November 21st, 2008 7:45am

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Soriah

Really good poem, I like the repetition of the last two lines. This has a good vibe to it! Soriah xx

Fri, November 21st, 2008 12:27pm

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DamienHaze

Nice piece you have here

Fri, November 21st, 2008 7:45pm

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guff01

You should always look forward to waking up each day, because you never know, one of those days could change your life for the better. Always hold out for hope for something you believe in. It just might happen

Fri, November 21st, 2008 11:27pm

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You are right..Have a great day.. if u liked my poem tell ur fans to read it. I wish that one day would be everyday.. To love,cheer and laugh all day long

Sat, November 22nd, 2008 12:40am

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Amorelle

Great poem! As a lot of ppl said, i can relate to this. I especially like the kssing the rays part. Really descriptive. Excellent!

Sat, November 22nd, 2008 10:03am

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Skydance

this lil poem will always have a sunny day out your
window.and i do not believe there was no comment on
the wonderful smiley face ? nice touch.....!

later,
sky.

Sat, November 22nd, 2008 1:06pm

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VictoriaDawn

aww....beautiful :)

Sat, November 22nd, 2008 3:39pm

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invisiblexme

nice poem. it's really uplifting. great job! =)

Sat, November 22nd, 2008 8:18pm

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thanks for commenting

Sun, November 23rd, 2008 1:30am

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Kirsten Rain

Beautiful

Sat, November 22nd, 2008 11:24pm

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thanks kirsten for your comment......

Sun, November 23rd, 2008 1:30am

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kristal

WOW!!! That was amazing! Yes...waking up to a new day is a wonderful thing!!! :-)

Sun, November 23rd, 2008 2:45am

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hey kristal thanks for commenting....

Sun, November 23rd, 2008 1:29am

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nid

I am glad that so many people have liked it...You all made my day......................

Sun, November 23rd, 2008 7:36am

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Me Against The World

Smiley face was a nice touch. :)

Lids?

Mon, November 24th, 2008 12:46am

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Thanks for the comment..If u liked this forward it....

Mon, November 24th, 2008 9:57pm

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nid

Thank You allllllllllllllllllllllllllll for making my poem to appear on the top of the religion and spirtuality section of booksie

Mon, November 24th, 2008 9:42am

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nid

Am totally pleased..............

Mon, November 24th, 2008 9:51am

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Thinker

Hi, Nid.

As I promised you, I read your poem. thank you to share with me (and everyone) I am agreed, every day is a new day and with this comes a light of hope.

Please, don't shut your window, this is another beautiful day.

Regards.

Mon, November 24th, 2008 8:08pm

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Thanks for the comment..If u liked this forward it....

Mon, November 24th, 2008 9:56pm

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Cathywrites1

I highly enjoyed this one...especially on a day like today. I needed the spiritual encouragement that your poem gave me!

I also loved the music you selected to go with this.

Tue, November 25th, 2008 2:17am

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Thanks for the comment..If u liked this forward it....

Mon, November 24th, 2008 9:55pm

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