Why Do I Love You When There's So Much at Risk?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just felt like writing this, got inspired. Not all too good, but oh well.

I love you It's as simple as that, but not at all Because I've given you my heart And I don't know if it will be okay I might not ever get it back But that's okay for now Because I think you've given me your heart as well And so I can keep living But what if you leave, you and your heart? And take mine as well Where does that leave me? How do I live? How will I ever move on? How can I trust someone again? So why do I love you when there's so much at risk? I don't know I don't think I can help it I just love you and I always will

Submitted: September 11, 2010

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This is beautiful dear, you have just expressed what we all can relate to. The fear of falling inlove is the biggest fear of all, because we become so vulnerable to love, that we can have it ripped out from below us, as if our heart dissolve into history. Love is hard, and although they tell you/us that they love us we can never completly trust them, because we have been hurt before, and am scared of being hurt again.
Sorry about my rambling, I love this poem. Its strong and very honest. Thankyou for posting.

Sun, September 12th, 2010 3:31am


Thank you for you comment and I agree with you. And I ramble all the time and i think rambling is sometimes where the best conversations start with so... (and rambling is how this little piece came about)

Sun, September 12th, 2010 4:14am


very well put into words the torment of doubt maybe fear.like this as its something a lot of folks can relate to.

Mon, September 13th, 2010 8:16am


Thank you, I'm glad you liked it

Mon, September 13th, 2010 1:04pm

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