A poem about looking into your love's eyes and finding everything

No one can describe looking into your eyes
A nothing will try..
Time stops
…and everyone notices
Eyelids become nonexistent as they bury themselves behind God’s second greatest gift to
They all want to be me
I completely freeze and you are majestically at ease
Cupid’s dart pierces me with serenity
Your elixir shoots through my head to my toes then tidal waves rush towards my soul
My heart slams into my chest every other beat, continually on rhythm
At this point there is always a question: Why this moment has she given? What keeps me from dying now in the eternal bliss of living?
You can take me away in an instant in time
You make the world yours by being alive
The stars were created to reflect beauty and life from your eyes
They spring everything from the nothingness that was once I

Submitted: July 09, 2008

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wow, that's amazing :) really beautiful. When i look into my boyfriends eyes all i see is my reflection, then i have to look away... lol! nice work

Wed, July 9th, 2008 9:15pm


hey thanks so much. if theres anything youd like me to read, id be more than happy too =)

Thu, July 10th, 2008 5:24am



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6. "Here To Stay" &

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Again! Thank you!

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Thu, July 10th, 2008 3:27am

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