The Nights Vampire

This is me new poem that i wrote last night, hope u like it and please PLEASE comment on it so i know that people actually read this stuff [besides Slave Driver!lol]

We are the bats of the night
We fly, we drink and savagely we fight
Although i walk and breath my life is dead and gone
Yes! thats right my heart stopped singing lifes song
Why? you may ask
Because the hate and evil my heart comsumed became an addictive drugh that was driven by power and led to my final hour.

As a living corpse i feed on the blood and adrenaline of the innocent
Because they are so pure, so naive and so ignorant that their empty black and white lives make their blood taste so delicious, so honest and angelically sweet.

My fangs are vicious weapons and are a trademark of what i am
A beast, a monster that shouldn't be approached, a disease they you can never get rid of
But my call is irresistible, even to the most powerful of men
My call will seduce you, pull you and will control your every move.
It will make my hunt even easier and your death even more pleasing.

I am a childs' worst nightmare
I am the nights' most lethal weapon
I own a black cloak and a blood red attire
yes! thats right i am the nights vampire!!