The scene!

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I tried to enter the Flash Fiction Summer the writing contest.. But it was not working. So, I did it as a piece of writing in my profile. Enjoy this.. Gimme your comments..

The scene is beautiful!*
The scene is beautiful!*
The scene is beautiful!*

The scene is beautiful!*

The girl who is wearing a blue scarf, a pair of orange leggings and a pair of dark blue deck shoes is my pal Emma. Emma.. She is a nice, pretty and mind-blowing girl. The pointed nose, blue eyes, small thin lips, tiny bangs and the wavy hair makes her more beautiful* and more serious. She is a perfect friend for a weird person like me.

Emma always likes to stay in peaceful, beautiful* and calm areas. 'Climbing mountains is one of the best ways to calm your mind' that is what she tells. The pointed edges of the rocks are the tooth of the mountain. The trees are the hair. And the path is the nerves. Emma is explaining the surrounding by sitting on the flatted edge of a rock.

The scene is a beautiful!*

The neighboring mountains are seemed to be covered with a thick layer of a trees. Both Emma and I were enchanted by the scene of the surrounding. The water carried from the river, by the small tributaries, enriches the nearby area. The small tributaries never see the main river. They never meet the mom. So do Emma. Won't be meeting me again in the future.

The scene is beautiful!*

She never climb mountains again. She never help me to do Math again. She is gone. But she is living. Nothing is impossible. It doesn't say that everything is possible. If so, bring Emma back to life.

The scene is beautiful!*

 

beautiful* - BEAUTIFUL IS JUST A CONCEPT.. Neither every person sees the nearby beautiful nor I.


Submitted: July 20, 2021

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DiyaSL

The surrounding was nicely described.
I Enjoyed it.
Good job.

Wed, July 21st, 2021 2:41am

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Thank you, D!!
Nishi = )

Sun, August 15th, 2021 4:07am

Criss Sole

You create such a beautiful and peaceful scene.
This was a pleasure to read.

Thu, July 22nd, 2021 5:54am

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Thank you, Criss!!
Nishi = )

Sun, August 15th, 2021 4:09am

Archia

The scene you described was really beautiful. And by the scene I mean the whole thing; Emma included. I think you captured so many of the different aspects of beauty and what can be beautiful in your story.

Sat, July 24th, 2021 12:34am

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Oh! Thanl you for your comment Archia... That means a lot to me... And thank you for taking time to read my essay...

Fri, July 23rd, 2021 7:00pm

DiyaSL

Well Done

You have done it so nicely,
The essay is amazing !!!!!!!


-DiyaSL

Wed, July 28th, 2021 8:19am

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Thank you for your kind words D..

Wed, July 28th, 2021 1:22am

Jator

Its nicely written. Especially I like the way of inter-mingling expressions of Emma and mountains. Good to read.

Sun, August 8th, 2021 5:05am

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Thank you Jator..
Nishi = )

Sat, August 7th, 2021 11:03pm

CM.N

It was sad and yet beautiful at the same time. I love it  when you describe the trees as the hair and the path as the nerves of the mountain. A great idea of personification. Thumbs up.

Sun, August 22nd, 2021 8:02am

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Thank you for your feedback C..
Nishi = )

Sun, August 22nd, 2021 1:04am

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