The Creature Inside

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

this poem is about my ultimate weakness which is fear. Fear is a common weakness that people go through in life. Hopefully you all can relate to this poem. Like and comment. The feedback will be very helpful and appreciated.

The creature thats inside of me wants to come out... Trapped in sadness and lathered in pain... For wish I will not have to see that creature again.... A familiar voice this creature attained... Made my mind go insane... Rips my conscience into pieces.... The creature is fear that was never needed...

Fear prevented me from speaking... Prevented me from feeling.... It tarnishes my soul without consent... Making my fear go away is vial... But why am I so in denial? Torn by this creature; I will conquer... For I have the ability to let fear wander... Crawl out of me with its vicious claw... Will let me breathe once and for all... Until that day comes I will prepare... For the day this creature will disappear...


Submitted: December 21, 2014

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Nikki Xayachack

Thank you for the advice! I usually do break my poems up if there is a storyline to it. since it was a short poem I thought it wasn't needed

Sun, January 25th, 2015 11:56pm

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