Covered by my lies

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This isnt really me speaking. but a part of me, that knows that people only lie to cover something up that they can never admit to, due to either embarassement or fear, or whatever. i know it doesnt really make sense. but if you read it a couple of times i hope it will.

Protected by my lies,

whenever I see your believing eyes.

Covered by my lies,

For they keep me still alive.

I hear a sweet voice,

this lovely voice: speaks the truth.

But I know,

these truths will come out lies.

I one day must admit to them,

but for now I think I won’t.

But just remember soon,

You too,

Will be covered by my lies.

Submitted: July 02, 2009

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soul

that was really good. I like the very ending line.

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 4:54am

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Thankyou!
im really glad you liked it :)

Wed, July 1st, 2009 10:06pm

PoetsDemise14

Ohh very creative use of words :)
I liked this poem,
It was nicely written :D
Keep writing

Sincerely,
Tricia-Marie

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 7:07am

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Thank you so much!
i really appreciate it :D

-NiKKi

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 12:13am

Magical Personification

Bravo! Bravo Nikki! This is a very creative poem! With my sweetest voice, I shall always speak the truth. ;)

Splendid poem Nikki, keep up the good work.

-Evan

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 7:07pm

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thankyou so much!
:)
-NiKKi

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 12:08pm

EmilyRose

really really nice. It flows really well too. :D

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 7:34pm

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thankyou! :) :) :)
-NiKKi

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 1:51pm

Marta Alicia Villalobos

It's really nice, it's really sad but really nice. Like you know I'm so sick of hearing about people being hurt, sometimes I want to know from the person doing the hurting.

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 9:22pm

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lol, thanks.
but yeah, im not really like that.
its just the poem.

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 3:58pm