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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
a short story im working on

Submitted: April 26, 2019

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Submitted: April 26, 2019






Magic is an illusion waiting to be solved by someone

smarter than the host of the Trick


“My name is Caleb Jackson but you can call me J for short but do NOT call me Jack I hate that name.

Only my dad can call me that But enough about me, let's get onto the story. And yes, I just broke the fourth wall."


This is how J’s  father disappeared


“Did you get the card you know i can't disappear without the card!” said Marten

“Yes sir i, i, i, got it right here” said Po Po “Where did you even get this?”

Marten The magnificent, showing on stage in one minute!

As they both walked down to the stage but let's fast forward to the end of the show, don't want to make the chapter too long!

“And that was my disappearing trick” said marten bowing “thank you, thank you.”

As marten was walking back to his car with his son and wife there was  a sound like whispering or just the wind. “Here son, i want you to have my top hat since im retiring”

“But your not even old!” “nice Joke”

Out of nowhere three men in black suits take marten from the arms and hold him down while the other one took the card out of his hand and whispered something similar to what they heard earlier and as they were disappearing marten broke free and threw his card is his hat that he gave to his son

“Do something!” marten shout while he disappeared

“Noooooooooooooo” “marten!!!”


Chapter two


Lunch Money


After a couple years from now.

“Beep, Beep, Beep”

“Ugh” “i hate mondays there the worst!”

“Get up caleb, i made you breakfast your, favorite eggs and bacon”

“Ok be right there” said J

J did not like mondays because of school and that it was the beginning of the week but because monday was when his dad was you could say was ‘Kidnapped?” and that it was the only day he did not study anomalies because of the new classes he had after school. He studied anomalies because it related to the card he keeps is a plastic case on his wall studying each anomalie to see if it related anyway to his dad`s magic card. Anyway let's get back to the story where did we leave off...oh right going to school.

“Hey Jack, got any lunch money today?!” said Ace basically the school bully.

“Yeah do you” said one of Aces goons.

“Leave him alone!” said J's best friend Ryan.

“Or what?” said another one of the goons.


“Dude my perfectly chiseled face” said Ace.

“Shut up Acer!” said Ryan.

Ryan Rodriguez and Caleb Jackson to the office now!

“What were you to thinking punching him!” said the principal sanchez

“I have the self defense card” said Ryan, a self defense card is basically a card that can only be used two times a week but only the nin jitsu club members got one.

“Fine but i'm watching you too!” said the principal gesturing that they leave now from the school.


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