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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

We loose the humanity under the black mask of monster character which was staying inside us and then we some good people began to choose another planet, too far than the galaxy and remaining stars.
Yet the devil things from the earth doesn't wish to quit us. Can we win this time? Can we save the new planet Aritos?


Story shouldn’t be too long but it has mysteries as hidden. I have been watching them many times. Dad says they are aliens. They don’t live on the planet Aritos. They like mutants so much. They can make themselves invisible. They try to do research about us. We shouldn’t let them do this. They do it against rules (Fifty six Aritosian royal laws that the citizens needed to obey regularly).

And today we gathered here, on the new stage of Aritos which is for everyone.

“Our history is not old yet. We are on the planet since a year,” Mr. Jeosi said.

He is the major leader of the small island kingdom Netolia.

“Can we know the reason behind their first attack?” a citizen stood and questioned him as anger.

“We are not humans any longer. We brought changes in the body. We didn’t destroy earth. We just leaved it before they destroy!”

Hundreds years ago we could know that earth is on the way of destruction. Man can’t survive more than the limited time and hence we some good people began to choose our own galaxy, another planet, too far than the moon and remaining stars.

“Maybe they wan to capture Aritos,” Mr. Jeosi said.

“Who are they?” an Aritosian (citizen of Aritos) asked.

“We don’t know,” Mr. Jeosi said.

“Do they look like humans?”

Mr. Jeosi looked the citizens. We all were worried for that incident.

“I don’t think so. I couldn’t see humanity in them. They were like evils!”

Thought, process of war was going to begin. We new guys were unable to stop this.

“Earth doesn’t seem good now. It has been containing chemical gases, viruses and so many devil things,” another Aritosian said.

“All of these things reaction might bring a complete change in human body but they didn’t become just like us. They are hungry. They have been waiting for us, outside of the planet’s gravity. We should stop them to enter the air.”

“Did you face them closely?” leader Manitos asked him.

“Yeah,” he replied. “They came to my home.”

“Why did they come to you?” Mr. Jeosi asked.

“They wanted to take me to earth. They need our blood to purify their own body, further,” the citizen said. “I needed to kill them because they wanted to eat my children.”

“Can you show me their body?” leader Manitos asked.

“Their bodies became invisible after I shoot them. Their number is millions actually. We should think of a solution,” citizen said.

We wanted to do something. Science gave us everything. We couldn’t forget to the past. We invented machines and they became able to fly. We show a way to small things also.

And the attachment with them didn’t leave us.

“War is the solution!” leader Manitos said.

“No, we can’t choose this. They will reborn. They will unite more harms for us,” Mr. Jeosi said. “We don’t want this!”

“Can we take help of scientists of Lumos city?” leader Manitos asked.

“What do you think? Will they allow us to visit there?” Mr. Jeosi said.

“No doubt” leader Manitos said. “They are our brothers from our own blood.”

“Humans are also our brothers but they are trying to destroy us for their own needs. We can’t trust them,” Mr. Jeosi said.

“They are some kind of evils now, not humans. We shouldn’t compare Lumos’ scientists to these destroyed earthers,” another leader said as he was sitting among them.

“Who will dare to go Lumos?” Mr. Jeosi said.

It is not just a simple thing to do. Giant monsters from the space protect the city. They don’t want common citizens enter the pure zone. This is strictly restricted and if you do you will have to think repeatedly.

They don’t like crowds. You will have to cheat them if you want to talk to Lumos’ scientists.

“I am ready to go there?” I stood and said as fearless, in respect.

“He is just a kid!” someone said.

“Yes, he is!”

They all were looking me in surprise. It seemed for the first time a darer was going to convince them.

“Can it be possible?” leader Manitos said. “How old are you?”

“21 years,” I said.

I was still there without being afraid.

“Do you know rules and regulation of Lumos city?” Mr. Jeosi said.

“Yes,” I said. “Yet I am ready for the mission.”

“Prepare a mechanical horse for the guy. He will go there. It’s final!” Mr. Jeosi ordered the workers.

From the darkness of the odd time I needed to select the horrible job for my citizens. I needed to do it myself with no guards and royal soldiers.

And I was going to show my sin to these horrible monsters of the space.




Aritosians on the both sides of the road were watching me as I was on my journey. The mission to convince Lumos’ scientists seemed very confidential. I did never stop then. I didn’t argue with my mind. It was saying me to slow down my mechanical horse. I tried to make him understand that we need to meet them as soon as possible because enemies can’t wait for us any longer.

The journey will take only a few hours. I didn’t think of taking rest. Wasting time wasn’t in my thought process. I was recharging my electrical horse’s engine during his run. It didn’t make difficulties for me.

After a while I stopped playing with speed of air. I reached at Lumos. I could see these dangerous monsters now, from a mile away.

“Where are you?” Mr. Jeosi asked me on the video calling.

I opened my notification page on the phone and began to chat with him.

I was going to inform him about the mission.

“I am near to Lumos’ entry gate. I will try to make myself invisible for a while. So that I can meet their chief minister,” I said and looked around me. I didn’t want someone notice me suddenly.

“Better you choose north side’s way and you can enter Lumos with no fear. Only two or three monsters stand there,” Mr. Jeosi said.

“I can do this,” I said.

“Good,” Mr. Jeosi said.

I did this. First I wanted to make myself invisible for a while. Thought it will protect me from Lumos’ beasts. They hunt alive to strangers and they even don’t spare to co-citizens. If they find wrong, soul inside a life fears them and never leave a chance to ignore the way to them. They belong to evil civilization.

“I am still wondering about you guy. How couldn’t you face Lumos’ monsters?” Mr. Edward said.

He is a scientist of the city since the planet brought us.

 “I could just properly utilize my brain!” I said.

“You have brought a message for us, what is that?” Mr. Edward asked.

I continued to resize my nano-digital computer in  front of him. I explained the problem carefuly.

“Human has already lost his humanity to make himself a dfferent kind of life. He is looking very ugly and bad. He is ready to hunt us, though we are not his enemies. He is outside of the planet’s gravity,” I said.

“You mean now they are zombies?” Mr. Edward said and looked me.

“Not sure but it seems difficult to defeat them. They want to capture Aritos, make us victims!” I said.

“What can we help you on this matter?” Mr. Edward asked.

“Give us 10 thousands robotic soldiers to fight them,” I said. “Monsters can join in the war also.”

“You asked me too less, do you need some new invented machine guns?” Mr. Edward said.

“Sure,” I said and gave a command of yes.

He took me to their experimental camp and showed these weapons’ images one after another on a screen board.

“Ge-9873,” Mr. Edward said. “It is a basic thing of the gods. They taught us about the weapon and we only use this against evils of hells.”

“Ho-40, we call it path of fire. It only utilized at the end of war when we see there is no way to get the victory.”

I was watching and recording them. I beacme hopeful after listening to him. At last I made a deal with him to import weapons and mechanical soldiers, from Lumos.

“Now we are prepared!” I said and looked.

“I will talk to chief-minister about the mission,” Mr. Edward said and shook my hand.

“Thanks,” I said.




We gathered more and more weapons against the enemies as needed. At first we made a digital protector over Aritos’ sky and then we began the journey towards baddy earthers. Ten thousands robotic soldiers with fifty thousand Aritosians brave fighters were going to fight to these evils. We raised speed of space-ships twice this time, crossed Aritos’ gravity and didn’t wait for their call. We had known that we don’t need any battle rules for them as they had been increasing odds.

“Attack!” Mr. Jeosi gave a loud command to all of us. We were behind to his ship.

Their monstrous sins were trying to make a terrible sound in the space. We fought very hard to them. They couldn’t stand any longer in front of us. We explode them one after another and cleared the situation with some original robotic weapons. Their hunger to eat and rule us couldn’t work. At last justice won. Aritos got the victory. Its citizens quit the fear of slavery and yes, to guard the planet from aliens we invented a permanent digital guardian around the sky which is having lots of securities, asking questions if you were from other stars and galaxies.







Submitted: January 14, 2018

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