Poem by: nocturnallife453
gone, future, past, passing, second, moments
Submitted: May 29, 2010
Every second past
Is a second gone.
Every second passing
Is one unknown.
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This was short, but very powerful. I think it's ... "shortness" is what makes it so awesome! :) Great job; you really are a talented writer. :D
Haha, thank you.(;
Hey now, hey now, it IS deep.
I liked the fact that it was short, because it was more powerful. A really very good poem! :)
Every second that captures a memory is precious.
short ,sweet, simple, tru bt PROFOUND!!!!!
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