Angel of Death*

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I transfered this from my old account and deleted it from there.
This is a pretty old poem. I wrote it a while ago.
Hope everyone likes.
I know some has already read it. :P

With clothes the color of night,

skin the color of death,

and eyes the color of rain.

I am the dark angel,

The angel of death.


Submitted: May 11, 2008

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EmmaTheUntamed

Awww! i was just getting an image in my head and then the poem stopped ;_; you should add to it ^.^ it sounds pretty cool so far!

XOXOPEACEXOXOX

Sun, May 11th, 2008 8:43pm

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lol heh
I made that a while ago.
I don't really write poems that much anymore.
I write novels.
Which I am working on now =)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
~mandy

Sun, May 11th, 2008 1:51pm

Itania

Pretty! I like it! Short sweet and to the point.
If you write novels I might want to check some of those out!

Mon, May 12th, 2008 2:01am

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Thank you!
I'm glad you liked it.
I am currently working on one.
I'm writing it now.
I had a novel up here on booksie up to chapter 5. I was writing chapter 6 when someone stole it off one of my other websites and posted it as there own on another website.
So, I just now came back after a couple months since that happened, with a new account.

~mandy

Sun, May 11th, 2008 7:34pm

Haliax

awesome!!!!! though that is what i expected of you

Wed, May 14th, 2008 9:21am

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lol thank you.
It is old. ^.^
Not really into writing poems that much.
Use to be a big fan of it.
But, you know what I like to do now. =)
But, I might write a few more.
~mandy

Wed, May 14th, 2008 2:23am

indiefreak

Short and simple. But full of imagery. Love it.

Fri, May 16th, 2008 9:51am

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thank you!
glad you liked it.

~mandy

Fri, May 16th, 2008 2:57am

Blisteredsouls

I liked it, it had a lot of potential in only four lines. Can't Wait to read more of your work.

Fri, May 16th, 2008 1:08pm

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Thank you!
I'm glad you liked it.

~mandy

Fri, May 16th, 2008 8:21am

Vicarious

Interesting.
It is particularly short, almost too short for my tastes, but it is both short and powerful - something difficult to come across.
Enjoyed.

Sat, May 17th, 2008 3:34am

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Thank you!
I'm glad you enjoyed it =)

~mandy

Fri, May 16th, 2008 8:44pm

TheOdyssey

nice poem

Sat, May 17th, 2008 7:10am

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thank you!

~mandy

Sat, May 17th, 2008 12:11am

Vampiresa

AAAAAAAA! I LOVED IT!! You should keep writting poems too! BTW I couldnt leave a comment on your profile... So i thought i could leave it here, thank you for the welcome, and i couldnt agree any more, that vampires do rock!!!!

Sun, May 18th, 2008 2:04am

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thank you
glad you liked it =)
~mandy

Sat, May 17th, 2008 9:02pm

faithiepoo92

oh myyy gawsh!! it was awesome!
it was so short, but so descriptive and beautifullll!
~Faith Marie~

Sun, May 18th, 2008 6:49am

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thank you!
glad you liked it ;)
~mandy

Sun, May 18th, 2008 12:00am

SteelSniper

What exactly is the color of Death? lol. Nice one XD

Sun, May 18th, 2008 8:08am

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I don't know. lol
I wrote this a long time ago.

~mandy

Sun, May 18th, 2008 12:33pm

Josee

I like the flow...I really enjoyed it all together, simple and wonderful. Great job!
-Josee-

Sun, May 18th, 2008 7:08pm

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Thanks!
Glad you liked it!
~mandy

Sun, May 18th, 2008 12:35pm

Kaylynn Brookes

Descriptive, dark, and slightly despairing. My favorite!

Tue, May 20th, 2008 2:44pm

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thanks!
glad you liked it =)
~mandy

Tue, May 20th, 2008 12:05pm

PropheticaLee Speaking

i agree with the first comment, good write just needs more more more.

Tue, May 20th, 2008 4:55pm

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lol
glad you liked it.
its an old poem, so im sorry to say im not going to mess with it.

~mandy

Tue, May 20th, 2008 12:06pm

deannajoy

it was short and to the point however i did like it i do wish it had been longer tho :) you seem to be a very talented writer i will have to go and read other works from you :)

Thu, May 22nd, 2008 5:14pm

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thank you ^^
~mandy

Thu, May 22nd, 2008 10:18am

Lacey Cummings

I think I read this on your old account. Its good - simple and powerful.

Sun, May 25th, 2008 1:12am

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yes, it was on my other account ^^ and thank you. I'm glad you like it ^^

~mandy

Sat, May 24th, 2008 6:40pm

XxDeathXxKissxX

short and sweet =]
brilliant as usual ^^
the description is great >

Mon, May 26th, 2008 2:31pm

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Thanks!
Glad you liked it ^.^

~mandy

Mon, May 26th, 2008 12:32pm

Cici

It is so beautiful. Love it very much. Keep up the good work.

Wed, May 28th, 2008 12:17pm

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thanks ^^
~mandy

Wed, May 28th, 2008 10:27am

stephhlebreton

eyes the color of rain....chilling! Your words are very lovely, I'm loving this!
Steph(:

Thu, May 29th, 2008 9:32pm

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thank you
glad you liked it ^^

Thu, May 29th, 2008 4:26pm

lemonluv

this is really good! I got a good picture of what the angel looked like!

Fri, May 30th, 2008 1:42am

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^^ thanks
glad you liked it
~mandy

Thu, May 29th, 2008 7:07pm

Pratibha

Imagination is running wild after reading this short and sweer poem....lol....i wish i could write such poems too

Mon, June 2nd, 2008 5:33am

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heh thank you!
really glad you liked it.
I use to write poems all the time..but i dont really write them anymore. Nor am i good. lol
Im more of a novel person anyways.
*~mandy~*

Sun, June 1st, 2008 10:47pm

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