The pain nobody seems to see

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem is about the feelings I feel, it holds the truth of actually what I feel. It shows that its so hard to have a friend ship with someone who is just a fake it is hard to live happy when people actually don't see your pain and agony your going through. You wish with all your heart that someone can stand by your side with out stabing you so deep in the heart and the back.

I stair blankely at the board
Yet my mind is spinning
My stomach is turning
and my life is upside down

I feel upset, I feel sad
Yet so confused
My face experssion is all but tired
and nobody seems to see

The banging sound inside my head won't leave
Yet the throbing pain inside my chest is lasting much to long
My mind has to many thoughts to think stairt
and my friendships give me no truth to see

I always wonder what road I'm on
Yet I always seem to get so lost
My sense of direction is my sense of failure
and now I'm ready to collapse and cry

I'm lost in this world so big compared to me
Yet there are signs to lead me
My friends is what I follow
and though I try to follow my heart and gut to lead me

I know what others may say
Yet I want to feel right for once
My friends and other people are always proving me wrong
and now I feel like I'm nothing

I wake up in the morning that this day will be different
Yet again its the same as always
My head starts spinning so hard
and the tears start to rush back to my eyes

I hide behind a mask that makes people think I'm always tired
Yet the real truth is actually hidden in my eyes
My eyes show what I'm actually feeling and how things are actually going for me
and nobody looks you in the eyes it's like they're trying to avoid the truth

The truth is, I want to live a happy life
I want my friends to know what I'm actually going through
I wait for them to see how I'm actually feeling
and yet one question, one answer and nothing more

So the pain grows and the tears fall
Yet they fall behind a mask of happiness and sleepyness
My heart flows through in my soul
and nobody can see because my eyes are always hidden

Now I shall wait with every second
Yet cry in pain and agony
All alone were nobody can hear my screams and crys
and all alone were nobody seems to notice me

So I wait, and wait for someone to come and save me
Save me from this pain and agony
Save me from my world of darkness and bring me into the light
I want a true friend and a true life to follow


Submitted: April 19, 2012

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one and only one

I so agree with this poem, I understand it and this one nice way to get your feelings from pilling up inside you. So you don't have to randomally break down. I believe that the more people that look you in the eyes, they'll usually understand what your feeling or who you are because your eyes never lie. Good poem I like it, just great job....

Fri, April 20th, 2012 5:17pm


Thanks, I'm glad that you understand. I totally agree too that people should look in the eyes, its like why try to avoid the truth when its right there infront of your face its like really. Whats so scary of knowing the truth, its better to understand and not to assume things. Well thanks for commenting and taking the time to read this. :P :) :D XD X) XP

Fri, April 20th, 2012 10:24am

lilyrose 1997

This poem is one that so many including myself can relate to I love your work and style each unique and very intresting ... Great work keep writing maybe stop by and look at mine sometime :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 8:23pm


Thanks, yeah the best poems and songs that are true from the heart, that has a real great meaning. I also like it when people can relate to my songs and poems, also a couple of my short stories. Thanks, I would love to stop by and look at your stuff. Thanks for commenting I apperciate it alot. It makes me happy, when people like my work. :) :P :D XP XD X)

Wed, April 25th, 2012 7:58am


wow, this is very good and oh so true, my friend. Job well done.i wish i could write poems T.T But you're great at it, thanks for sharing.

Mon, April 30th, 2012 9:58pm


Yeah, I like writing things from the feelings and the true of the heart... Thanks that means alot to me...even though most of my poems might not excatly ryhme very well. Thanks I apperciate it, it makes me really happy to hear that about my poems. Well thanks for commenting and taking time to read it. :) :P :D XD X) XP

Tue, May 1st, 2012 7:36am

Stormbird Throneshaker

Written from the depths of the heart through the eyes of the soul!

Thu, May 17th, 2012 12:15am


thanks and that rhymed :P, yeah there is alot of truths to the things I write

Wed, May 16th, 2012 5:43pm

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