Let your actions speak

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

I was think of footprints that dont leave a mark when i wrote this.
Please share what this means to you, any comment would be welcome.

When footprints leave
No mark upon the earth
And caresses are none at all
Let your actions speak
 
When a biting chill
Holds your body still
And blood runs to ice
Let your actions speak
 
When the tears fall
And leave no mark
As silent sobs are heard
Let your actions speak
 
When the time passes
And the light draws near
Walk towards it
And so your actions speak


Submitted: December 03, 2007

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rickyengland

Hi Nova. I like this one. It makes me think of faith, which to me is an action not just a belief.We may say we have faith in a bridge holding us, but until we walk across it, our faith is only words, and has not yet been tested.Keep up the good writing. Ricky.

Sun, February 10th, 2008 11:17pm

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thanks for the indepth comment
i like the idea of faith being actions, far too many people flaunt faith. hope you read more off my pieces and enjoy
thanks
nova

Wed, February 13th, 2008 12:45am

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