Gone Forever But Not For Never in My Heart

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

A loved one dies. And the speaker talks about it.

 

I wanted to hold his hand but they wouldn't allow it. I'll never forgive them for that. Or the fact that they told me he would live, when I knew in my heart and mind he wouldn't. They must thought it would lift my spirts. It didn't.
 
On his last day, they let me say goodbye, but I still couldn't  touch him. Didn't they know I would rather die of a disease, instead of living with out him? Guess not.
 
He tried to kiss me. On that last day. They wouldn't allow it, I wanted to cry of anger. I hadn't touched my love in two days, seventeen hours, fifty-three minutes, eighteen seconds, 19, 20, 21... Counting's hard.
 
He put his hand on the window. The horrible thing that seperated us. I tried to copy him but I just couldn't, my heart was breaking too much. I know this might sound terrible of me, but I wanted to smile at this. Because I knew what this ment. True Love.
 
He died. Right there, while I was watching him. He slid down, putting his back towads me, still showing part of his face. God I miss him. I will miss him so much.


Submitted: April 16, 2012

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Deathstix

How very depressing! I liked this, though. Great job!!
With all due respect, Deathstix

Mon, April 16th, 2012 12:50am

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Thank You! I know its depressing but if i ever finish this it will be better. (Happier, I mean.) :D

Sun, April 15th, 2012 5:54pm

luvbug1

This was a very depressing short story. it toutched my heart and i almost started to cry

Mon, April 16th, 2012 1:11am

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I'm sorry. *hugs*. I'm gonna make it longer and happier. Hopefully if i can squeeze it in. :D

Sun, April 15th, 2012 8:18pm

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