Bleeding....

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

well..i just wrote down something....and hope you like it :)

I'm bleeding...

But weird i can't feel a thing...

I have gone soo numb

And now don't feel anything...

And probably i'm going to bleed till death....

All because of you...

You stabbed me with your looks

Pierced me with your words

And torn me apart

By just ignoring me...

Can't you see me dying???

Didn't you ever had any feelings for me???

Or do you even have any thing like humanity

within you...to save me???


Submitted: July 06, 2008

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to the world a black balloon

Nice I loved it keep up the good work.

Sun, July 6th, 2008 10:54am

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thank you...glad you liked it!! :D

Sun, July 6th, 2008 4:01am

Olwen

You are loved.. very painful poem... who cares about them.. take care of yourself young one...Olwen nice work

Mon, July 7th, 2008 10:34pm

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thanks Olwen...glad you liked it! ^_^

Mon, July 7th, 2008 7:22pm

erm1980

I love this one, I can almost feel the pain you had when you wrote it. Really nice!

Wed, September 10th, 2008 2:32pm

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Thank you!XD
Glad you liked it!!

Wed, September 10th, 2008 8:48am

Me Against The World

I love the words, but there are far too many elipsis points. Go back and read, see what you think. In my opinion, it drags down the beauty of the words and you never want to distort an amazing poem.

Lids?

Wed, November 26th, 2008 2:41pm

Author
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Oh...i'll check it soon!
And thanks for your opinion :-)

Thu, November 27th, 2008 2:50am

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