I'm bleeding...
But weird i can't feel a thing...
I have gone soo numb
And now don't feel anything...
And probably i'm going to bleed till death....
All because of you...
You stabbed me with your looks
Pierced me with your words
And torn me apart
By just ignoring me...
Can't you see me dying???
Didn't you ever had any feelings for me???
Or do you even have any thing like humanity
within you...to save me???
Submitted: July 06, 2008
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You are loved.. very painful poem... who cares about them.. take care of yourself young one...Olwen nice work
Mon, July 7th, 2008 10:34pm
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thanks Olwen...glad you liked it! ^_^
Mon, July 7th, 2008 7:22pm
I love this one, I can almost feel the pain you had when you wrote it. Really nice!
Wed, September 10th, 2008 2:32pm
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Thank you!XD
Glad you liked it!!
I love the words, but there are far too many elipsis points. Go back and read, see what you think. In my opinion, it drags down the beauty of the words and you never want to distort an amazing poem.
Lids?
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Oh...i'll check it soon!
And thanks for your opinion :-)
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Nice I loved it keep up the good work.
Sun, July 6th, 2008 10:54amAuthor
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thank you...glad you liked it!! :D
Sun, July 6th, 2008 4:01am