Last Moments...

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nothin to say...just read it nd hope u like it :)

Going on dancing and laughing againFor I might never get a second chanceEnjoying the very last moments of life…
Cherishing every bit of it with love
Never wishing those moments to goNor to let go of them while I leave
Bidding good-bye to all beloved people
Bringing tears to one’s eyes…While the reason being only me
Though I never wanted to be the reason
So am I touched…to see the loveBut sorrowful to leave them all
My last wish…never let your tears to fall
While I’m gone…for good…for ever…But save them to shed while you’re happy…


Submitted: June 24, 2008

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dreaming of you

i really enjoyed this . i will look in again

Wed, June 25th, 2008 1:04pm

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thank you :)

Sat, July 5th, 2008 11:04pm

nuttyz

thanks. i hope you'll enjoy the others too :)

Wed, June 25th, 2008 7:38pm

mystory

You touched me yet again with you way with words. You really do have a talent! ^^

Sun, June 29th, 2008 10:33pm

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thanks!! :D

Sat, July 5th, 2008 10:27pm

nuttyz

(A)...hehe...thank you so much!

Mon, June 30th, 2008 6:08am

Stephanee

I think this is my favorite of all your poems that I've read so far. It was so beautiful, and the sentiment it expresses is really touching. One typo: in the 3rd stanza "biding" should be "bidding." But otherwise a wonderful poem!

Stephanee :)

Tue, July 29th, 2008 4:55pm

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really??! Wow!! Thank you soooo mcuh!!!
I'd correct it right away!

Glad you liked it!! ^_^

Tue, July 29th, 2008 10:01am

yuricullen13

this poem is great i think i'll become one of your fans! can't wait to read more!!

Fri, September 26th, 2008 4:28pm

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WOW!!!*grinning wiiide*
Thanks a lot!!XD

Fri, September 26th, 2008 10:38am

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